On the Sharp Side

On the sharp side of a raindrop
I felt the ice as I fell through
The deceiving of a cloud top
On the sharp side

Not fragile in the midst of blue
This toiling hailstorm workshop
A sudden jarring breath I drew

Yet places I would never swap
Plunging toward the earth, I knew
It’s not here me or rain will stop
On the sharp side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Very interesting imagery, Hat
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