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On the Sharp Side

On the sharp side of a raindrop I felt the ice as I fell through The deceiving of a cloud top On the sharp side Not fragile in the midst of blue This toiling hailstorm workshop A sudden jarring breath I drew Yet places I would never swap Plunging toward the earth, I knew It’s not here me or rain will stop On the sharp side

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Date: 3/25/2023 2:54:00 PM
Great viseral images, I will now look up what a roundel is!
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Date: 3/24/2023 1:14:00 PM
Very interesting imagery, Hat
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