On the Same Blessed Ground

When I see the moon, I think of you. When the flowers bloom I think of you but with the rain my teardrops fall. If only I could have given my all. I would have been the happiest dreamer that ever dreamed a dream. The sun would shine if only you could have been mine. I would have danced all the time and sang a song of love to you that to no one else I could ever do. Instead a hymn to God I sing of thanks and praise that He my dead heart did raise and for a little while I was aglow with love I thought I’d never know. But alas, sometimes I give in and grieve, my feelings on my sleeve. Heartaches and blood seeping through my skin so thin. And I pray forgiveness for this sin of nursing the pain I should hold within. But because I loved you so I knew I had to let you go. I will always be blessed by the day you came my way and loved me too like no one else could ever do. So, my dear. Do not fear. I will always be here thinking of you and seeing your face that from my mind I can’t erase. I just pray to God to please be kind and next time ‘round we’ll be born on the same blessed ground. By: Carole O’Terry Duet; Copyright: 6/11/2018; “All Rights Reserved”

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Date: 6/13/2018 10:37:00 AM
Very lyrical and well done Carole...
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Carole Duet
Date: 1/26/2019 10:49:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. Carole :D
Date: 6/13/2018 1:28:00 AM
Hmm another great poet. You and another great poet Maria Williams should do a Duet!! ?? Pardon the pun
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/13/2018 6:23:00 PM
Hi Martin. Yes, Maria is really a "great poet" and I am honored to think that you think she and I could be in the same class. We are both romantics (and friends) for sure. Carole
Date: 6/12/2018 11:18:00 PM
What a marvellous read my dear friend, I feel your sadness in this write. Yet there seems to be a familiarity also in this love of which you speak. Could it be a 'Love' from a past life? I feel in this life we are forever seeking ' past loves and past experiences' to recreate it all over again but maybe one makes the journey to experience a different life this time around, if that makes any sense? I love your optimistic closing lines, I do believe you will manifest that wish. A definite fave for me....Maria hugs
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/13/2018 6:28:00 PM
I hope you are right, Maria, and thank you for your sweet comment and the FAVE thingy! :D Carole
Date: 6/12/2018 4:32:00 PM
Hello Carole!! I am really glad I dropped by to take a read of your marvelous verse here. Beautiful, moving, and passionate. I do hope indeed that there is a "next time round." Best Always, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/19/2018 6:04:00 PM
Carole, I forgot to mention. I did give your splendid work here a FAVE as well!! Best, Gary
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/12/2018 9:39:00 PM
I'm so glad you dropped by too, Gary, and thank you so much for your encouraging comment. Carole
Date: 6/11/2018 12:19:00 PM
Such a beautiful hymn
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/11/2018 12:42:00 PM
Hi Tim and thank you. Carole
Date: 6/11/2018 12:13:00 PM
Beautiful Carole! I love this one...xx
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/11/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Charles. I'm glad you do. Carole
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