On the Road To Heaven

The trumpet sounded on two
     creatures during their old days.
     one was poor and one was rich.
     the poor the first the rich the second.
      
     O my dear when did you come; 
     on the 1st ofthis month;
     Well, my was on the 22nd;
     O you are welcome.

     I thank him that he took me away from that place;
     Well i dont thank him because the place was sweet;
     I hate that place with all my heart and with all my soul;
     How stupid you are to say that it was the most loveliest place
     I had ever been.
     
     How was your Burial?
     It was full of fun enjoyment, 
     People didnt cry but they laughed and played with
     my remains o how wonderful;
     What of yours?
     So horrible,my casket was a mat and
     my people cried and felt me
     my remains were dropped in the streets  
     o how horrible;
     
     I love this place it is beautiful;
     All i see is just fire;
     Well i am seeingparadise even more than that place;
     This place is horriblr that place is far better;
      
     O come and eat with me my friend;
     No ypu come and have my pains;
     What do you mean.I had enough of that when i was on earth;
     Please, save me from this place i want to go back;
     
     NO WAY.This place is everlasting
     the sinner shall not go un punished

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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