Audrey Haick Poet Quatrain

On the Rebound

On the rebound, a little scared
Am I moving too fast?
Foot on the gas
Should I stop here?

Never felt so good! Never like this!
On top of this mountain!
Feels so damn good!
Maybe just catch my breath!

Euphoria meets forlorn
Though Hearts and minds in sync
Pen and paper the medium
Dare to love another mortal blindly?

Take a good hard look!
See the whole picture?
Follow head or heart?
Too late!  I’m already there!

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L'Nass Shango February 9, 2010 at 9:14 AM Only through the rebound we find resilience ... another masterpiece of love.

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2010 at 12:17 PM This one is so cool, Audrey, and the way you finished it off. GREAT way to end it. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2010 at 4:24 PM I hear ya! I guess it's best to take the risk to love...it's what I trying to do. To be brave and happy for every bit of love I'm given.

Michael Harman January 9, 2010 at 12:12 PM too funny, i do it too.

Marty Owens January 8, 2010 at 7:31 PM This is a beautiful poem Audrey...enjoy reading all your poems...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne January 8, 2010 at 4:42 PM Great poem well expressed, can hardly wait to hear the rest! :)-Robert

James Fraser January 8, 2010 at 1:49 PM Oooo, is there going to be a follow up, mm >> nice write Audrey >> James

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2010 at 12:01 PM What a ride, right to that very clever little ending!!! See ya! andrea

John Freeman January 7, 2010 at 10:07 AM Love in bloom, too late too soon.Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2010 at 4:05 PM Is luv in bloom on Soup again?.. by the words of your poem I think so... luv the way your words and questions entice the reader to decide.. yes or no for the poet... then the last line already seals the fate.. happy endings always make me cry.. but this one is terrific.. let me in on your secret Audrey my friend.... luv... LInda-Marie..