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On the Rebound

On the rebound, a little scared Am I moving too fast? Foot on the gas Should I stop here? Never felt so good! Never like this! On top of this mountain! Feels so damn good! Maybe just catch my breath! Euphoria meets forlorn Though Hearts and minds in sync Pen and paper the medium Dare to love another mortal blindly? Take a good hard look! See the whole picture? Follow head or heart? Too late! I’m already there!

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 2/9/2010 9:14:00 AM

Only through the rebound we find resilience ... another masterpiece of love.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2010 12:17:00 PM

This one is so cool, Audrey, and the way you finished it off. GREAT way to end it. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2010 4:24:00 PM

I hear ya! I guess it's best to take the risk to love...it's what I trying to do. To be brave and happy for every bit of love I'm given.

Michael Harman

Date: 1/9/2010 12:12:00 PM

too funny, i do it too.

Marty Owens

Date: 1/8/2010 7:31:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem Audrey...enjoy reading all your poems...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/8/2010 4:42:00 PM

Great poem well expressed, can hardly wait to hear the rest! :)-Robert

James Fraser

Date: 1/8/2010 1:49:00 PM

Oooo, is there going to be a follow up, mm >> nice write Audrey >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2010 12:01:00 PM

What a ride, right to that very clever little ending!!! See ya! andrea

John Freeman

Date: 1/7/2010 10:07:00 AM

Love in bloom, too late too soon.Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2010 4:05:00 PM

Is luv in bloom on Soup again?.. by the words of your poem I think so... luv the way your words and questions entice the reader to decide.. yes or no for the poet... then the last line already seals the fate.. happy endings always make me cry.. but this one is terrific.. let me in on your secret Audrey my friend.... luv... LInda-Marie..