On The Pond

Floating on curved wings
feet rippling silver surface
Mallards come to rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 11:21 AM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, I can just pocture the birds at the pond. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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February 26, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Hello Jerry, You are welcome. Enjoy your day to my friend. /Darlene/
Brotherton Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 6:02 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your kindness. Hope you have a great day.
Jones Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 1:36 AM
Lovely haiku with beautiful imagery
Brotherton Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 5:53 PM
I appreciate your kind words and friendship, Karen
Baker Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 9:18 PM
Nice Haiku, Jerry, I could see the picture you so clearly showed through your imagery. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Brotherton Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, my friend. Glad you liked it.
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