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On The Pond

Floating on curved wings feet rippling silver surface Mallards come to rest

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/25/2024 11:21:00 AM

Hello Jerry Brotherton, I can just pocture the birds at the pond. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/26/2024 10:49:00 AM

Hello Jerry, You are welcome. Enjoy your day to my friend. /Darlene/

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/25/2024 6:02:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your kindness. Hope you have a great day.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/25/2024 1:36:00 AM

Lovely haiku with beautiful imagery

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/25/2024 5:53:00 PM

I appreciate your kind words and friendship, Karen

Bill Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 9:18:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Jerry, I could see the picture you so clearly showed through your imagery. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/25/2024 5:52:00 PM

Thank you, my friend. Glad you liked it.