On the Outer Edges of Space

Some say there are aliens living on the frontiers of space
Who've traveled beyond the boundaries of the known universe
Gotten very near the gates of heaven, spoken face to face

With God in their extraordinary tongue, engaged in commerce
Potentially, of course, since we've not met either of the two
Taking extreme care associating for better or worse

With these alien beings from afar, lest they run us through.
But we have lots of dealings with God, who created it all,
Swearing by all that's holy we give the Almighty his due

Still, somewhere from the reaches of our minds we often recall
The possibility these strange aliens we talk about
Are queuing up on the right side, are standing near heaven's hall

If that is the case, perhaps, we are flirting with harmful doubt
We should expend more effort getting to know those with the clout.

Written April 25, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 7:47 AM
I fully concur "We should expend more effort getting to know those with the clout." Of course I grew up watching My Favorite Martian and my children grew up with Mork and Mindy!
Hankins Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your comment and for sharing your experiences. I don't believe we have tapped the surface of these extra-terrestrial resources, and I believe the government knows more than they will tell us.
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Such an interesting idea! First I've ever heard of it! Queue up, I guess. ~ Pearly Gates, gw
Hankins Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:52 PM
Well, GW, you hear of something new everyday, I guess. Yeah, I think we're probably all in the queue waiting our turn. Who knows?
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Quite nearly a heavenly write.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 3:57 AM
Yup, was just being funny...lol
Hankins Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:52 PM
lol. I'd say so on the part of the aliens, Kim, but I'm not so sure we're very near heaven, at all. Probably not esoteric enough to be labeled "heavenly" but I accept your sweet compliment.
Michael Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Nice one...I'm sure these unknown creatures are here...but at the same time, we should concentrate on the immediate needs of mankind and our planet...There are so many things we are yet to understand...Enjoyed it.
Hankins Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, Arturo. I appreciate your kind comments and wish the best for you. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
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