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On the Other Hand

My hand had planned for a bare finger ~ until you put a ring on it.

8/25/20

Entered in 'Charm Me' contest

romantic lovemonoku

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Sam Kauffman

May 27, 2021 at 10:14 AM

That says it all my friend! I am charmed and enchanted by your delightful monoku! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

May 23, 2021 at 7:08 PM

Congratulations, Michelle, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery in the Monoku poem. Hugs Eve

Bette Bavington

September 2, 2020 at 7:36 PM

Looks to me like you won in two ways. Congratulations on both.

Paghunda Zahid

September 1, 2020 at 11:18 AM

Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2020 at 2:27 PM

Now THIS is fantastic. One of my favorites so far. Congrats in the contest.

Gershon Wolf

August 29, 2020 at 8:56 PM

Back with congrats, Michelle, 'barely' in time. Way to go! :) gw

Vijay Pandit

August 29, 2020 at 1:50 PM

Congrats on your win, Michelle--it worked out beautifully.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2020 at 1:07 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Michelle :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman

August 29, 2020 at 11:22 AM

Just when we think...tender and sweet and full of irony, Michelle! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

August 29, 2020 at 10:43 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Michelle. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

August 29, 2020 at 6:29 AM

Congratulations! Love comes suddenly.

Krish Radhakrishna

August 29, 2020 at 4:34 AM

Congrats on a romantic Monoku! And your win!

Line Gauthier

August 29, 2020 at 4:25 AM

lol ~ sometimes plans certainly do take on an unexpected turn

Silent One

August 29, 2020 at 2:49 AM

Such is love... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jennifer Proxenos

August 29, 2020 at 1:47 AM

Things, thoughts and situations change in life, yours I am sure was for the better. A great monoku Michelle. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Watt

August 26, 2020 at 1:54 PM

A touching love poem with your signature wry humor and delightful title. Enjoy your day, my friend.

Rico Leffanta

August 26, 2020 at 11:50 AM

Wedding rings are interesting; in Germany, one wear the wedding ring on the left ring-finger when one gets engaged, and then switches it to the right ring-finger when one weds. When I was engaged to a German girl, there was no end to women hitting on me under the belief that I was safely wed! Aloha! Rico