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On the Other Hand

My hand had planned for a bare finger ~ until you put a ring on it. 8/25/20 Entered in 'Charm Me' contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/27/2021 10:14:00 AM

That says it all my friend! I am charmed and enchanted by your delightful monoku! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/23/2021 7:08:00 PM

Congratulations, Michelle, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery in the Monoku poem. Hugs Eve

Bette Bavington

Date: 9/2/2020 7:36:00 PM

Looks to me like you won in two ways. Congratulations on both.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/1/2020 11:18:00 AM

Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 2:27:00 PM

Now THIS is fantastic. One of my favorites so far. Congrats in the contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2020 8:56:00 PM

Back with congrats, Michelle, 'barely' in time. Way to go! :) gw

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/29/2020 1:50:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Michelle--it worked out beautifully.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2020 1:07:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Michelle :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2020 11:22:00 AM

Just when we think...tender and sweet and full of irony, Michelle! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2020 10:43:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Michelle. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2020 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations! Love comes suddenly.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/29/2020 4:34:00 AM

Congrats on a romantic Monoku! And your win!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/29/2020 4:25:00 AM

lol ~ sometimes plans certainly do take on an unexpected turn

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 2:49:00 AM

Such is love... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/29/2020 1:47:00 AM

Things, thoughts and situations change in life, yours I am sure was for the better. A great monoku Michelle. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 1:54:00 PM

A touching love poem with your signature wry humor and delightful title. Enjoy your day, my friend.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/26/2020 11:50:00 AM

Wedding rings are interesting; in Germany, one wear the wedding ring on the left ring-finger when one gets engaged, and then switches it to the right ring-finger when one weds. When I was engaged to a German girl, there was no end to women hitting on me under the belief that I was safely wed! Aloha! Rico

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/26/2020 7:56:00 AM

Nice how you blended the title and the monoku together. Cute as a button! ~ gw

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/25/2020 11:50:00 PM

Love this wonderful 'Monoku' first the title followed by the amazing one liner..Stay Safe Michelle..Harry