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On the Near Edge of Seventy

I'm on the near edge of seventy
and I wonder if I've lost my destiny.

Did I I waste too much time on foolish things
like envy, jealously and those many brass rings.

Was being good quite good enough
to cancel out the evil done when times got rough?

Sometimes I collected honey,
sometimes I ran after money.

Sometimes I was held with strings,
sometimes I was given wings.

If after that the Lord don't call my bluff,
I'll have the golden angel halos to buff.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "On the Near Edge of Seventy" write with a great ending. First, age is just a number. I have been 24 for many years now. Hahaha!!! Many questions with many answers to come. Enjoy your age & your 70ssssssssss. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
Achara Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Thank you.
Goff Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Love the comments, Chetta, agreed; same! Good ink!
Rose  Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:25 AM
lol I really love this and your sense of modesty is refreshing dear Chetta. I really enjoyed your poem, have a blessed day, xo
Greenhough Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:42 PM
An excellent poem. Age goes on, but we don't have to admit it. This is a lovely poem.
Achara Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Thank you.
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