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On the Near Edge of Seventy

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I'm on the near edge of seventy and I wonder if I've lost my destiny. Did I I waste too much time on foolish things like envy, jealously and those many brass rings. Was being good quite good enough to cancel out the evil done when times got rough? Sometimes I collected honey, sometimes I ran after money. Sometimes I was held with strings, sometimes I was given wings. If after that the Lord don't call my bluff, I'll have the golden angel halos to buff.

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Date: 4/23/2024 11:36:00 AM
Love the comments, Chetta, agreed; same! Good ink!
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Date: 4/23/2024 5:33:00 AM
having arrived at 70, I can identify with your words. I often ponder the same things, especially "Did I I waste too much time on foolish things" Enjoyed reading your thought provoking and mindful words. Enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 4/23/2024 4:25:00 AM
lol I really love this and your sense of modesty is refreshing dear Chetta. I really enjoyed your poem, have a blessed day, xo
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Date: 4/22/2024 6:42:00 PM
An excellent poem. Age goes on, but we don't have to admit it. This is a lovely poem.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/22/2024 6:46:00 PM
Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs