On the Lonesome Way

The lonesome way this evening,
beneath the hush of twilight,
my lonely mind
wants to walk with you.

Come, darling,
do not look back ,
see how serene and lovely
this evening is,
with you and me together.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 9:59 AM
A hearty invitation to the sweetheart for a stroll together in the evening at twilight. Akham, enjoyed reading your poem.
Empress Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 2:55 AM
This is so beautiful, and reminds me somehow to also focus on the beauty around ~ amidst the loneliness and the nostalgia that creeps in sometimes. A very touching and heartfelt poem. So well woven. Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
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