On the Horizon

On the Horizon

My limbs and leaves are trembling
My green days of shade and blue shadow near gone,
For on the near horizon lies
The first cold flail of fall.

To compensate, my Maker made 
My edges to wondrously curl and color
Dipping and spiraling as butterflies,
‘Ere I am browned and blown
To the ground.

I remember when I raised my head
After dark winter’s bitter gales,
Stretching my arms and blossoming,
And being caressed in warm sun, adored.

From that gracious beginning adulation,
Rich maturity and pride were mine,
My limbs grew long and reached strong,
Higher and higher to the sky.

From days fast passing, I must then bid farewell
Grandly with gold, blazing red and orange
To let winter have its hibernate way
As I Leave this short life behind

And pray for one more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hodges Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Beautiful!
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Profound Sunlite
Wanter Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 5:10 PM
I am deeply flattered that you went back and picked this poem to make such a nice comment. Thank you.
Kroll Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Beautiful!! I am so honored that you are a new follower. Love the ending and the way you captured the passage of time. The Strong imagery keeps me reading. So well done.
Staton Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Very good imagery. I could see the tree's autumn leaves falling, falling down as it readied itself for winter.
Wanter Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Thank you for finding this and the nice comment.
Bateman Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Hello Sunlite, A very rich and marvelous write here for sure. The imagery is brilliantly rendered and catches the reader's attention. Superb and A FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent read of one of my poems!! --GB)
Wanter Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Oh, my, what a great comment!
Lindley Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:25 AM
I CAME BACK TO READ THIS FINE POEM AGAIN MY FRIEND.. And found that it was still a fine and gleaming gem.....
Wanter Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Your kindness is over the top! Thank you.
Emu Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Well done, the Mourning of winters return is a lament I share.
Lindley Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:23 AM
AS DO I.. HOT IS GOOD, AS IN FOOD, COFFEE, EVEN WEATHER IF IT IS SUMMER BUT BRUTAL COLD IS NOT MY CUP OF TEA.
Wanter Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, thank you!
Lindley Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 9:51 PM
I am in awe of the creativity, imagery and depth of this treasured piece my friend! For me this is a masterpiece I have now just read.. A fav and without any doubt IN MY MIND THIS IS A Super 10!
Wanter Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Coming from a master, that is really kind, Robert. Thank you.
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Very beautiful poem Sunlite!:) Great imagery from start to last line of it. Sure enjoyed reading it. A fav!:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)) D.
Wanter Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 12:20 PM
I thought I had thanked you, Dorian. If not, I do so now, and congratulate you on your beautiful poetry.
Raven Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Hi Sunlite, a piece of poetry that brings me peace as i read. A most creative write. This is an excellent write and i have already read it again here. The images are beautiful. May your pen ever run gold. This has to be laced in my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
Wanter Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 6:14 PM
You are so, so kind!!!
Downing  Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 12:57 PM
A very creative and beautiful work! I enjoyed it very much :)
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:07 PM
Thank you for such a nice comment!
Berggren Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Nice comparison between a person and a tree. This is very creative.
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Appreciate your insight. Thank you.
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Beautifully penned my friend...goodbye summer...hell-o winter lol...god bless...^WW^
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:09 PM
God bless you, too. Thank you.
Marie Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Just beautiful sunlite. I am a summer girl at heart yet the gorgeous colours of autumn are mesmerizing. I adore the spiritual feel of your poem and the quiet it inspires to be grateful for all of our blessings in every season. a fave
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Your comments are very welcome!!!
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 4:21 PM
I hope more than one... lovely poetry
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Thank you much much, Tim!
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Brilliant Sunlite, no pun intended, not a bad way to exit, out in a blaze of color...
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Thank you for your insight, Charlie.
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 1:05 PM
So well written and a lovely depiction of the effects of cold and fall.
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Appreciate your kindness!
Fleming Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Such a melancholy time Autumn...even admidst all the blazing colour! How are you keeping these days, Sunlite? Well -- I hope! Thought it was time to call in and pay my regards. All my very best wishes! :) john P.s Charming little poem. :)
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Wow, John, how nice to hear from you!
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:37 AM
What a great poem Sunlite. I can feel the sadness and wish for more life as you ended it!! Well done :)
Wanter Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
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