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On the Horizon

On the Horizon My limbs and leaves are trembling My green days of shade and blue shadow near gone, For on the near horizon lies The first cold flail of fall. To compensate, my Maker made My edges to wondrously curl and color Dipping and spiraling as butterflies, ‘Ere I am browned and blown To the ground. I remember when I raised my head After dark winter’s bitter gales, Stretching my arms and blossoming, And being caressed in warm sun, adored. From that gracious beginning adulation, Rich maturity and pride were mine, My limbs grew long and reached strong, Higher and higher to the sky. From days fast passing, I must then bid farewell Grandly with gold, blazing red and orange To let winter have its hibernate way As I Leave this short life behind And pray for one more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/12/2020 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 4/11/2019 3:36:00 PM
Profound Sunlite
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/11/2019 5:10:00 PM
I am deeply flattered that you went back and picked this poem to make such a nice comment. Thank you.
Date: 7/17/2018 3:26:00 PM
Beautiful!! I am so honored that you are a new follower. Love the ending and the way you captured the passage of time. The Strong imagery keeps me reading. So well done.
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Date: 10/2/2017 11:48:00 AM
Very good imagery. I could see the tree's autumn leaves falling, falling down as it readied itself for winter.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/2/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thank you for finding this and the nice comment.
Date: 9/14/2017 8:44:00 AM
Hello Sunlite, A very rich and marvelous write here for sure. The imagery is brilliantly rendered and catches the reader's attention. Superb and A FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. Thanks for your recent read of one of my poems!! --GB)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/14/2017 9:31:00 AM
Oh, my, what a great comment!
Date: 9/1/2017 5:25:00 AM
I CAME BACK TO READ THIS FINE POEM AGAIN MY FRIEND.. And found that it was still a fine and gleaming gem.....
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/1/2017 11:28:00 AM
Your kindness is over the top! Thank you.
Date: 8/27/2017 3:49:00 PM
Well done, the Mourning of winters return is a lament I share.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2017 5:23:00 AM
AS DO I.. HOT IS GOOD, AS IN FOOD, COFFEE, EVEN WEATHER IF IT IS SUMMER BUT BRUTAL COLD IS NOT MY CUP OF TEA.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/29/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 8/26/2017 9:51:00 PM
I am in awe of the creativity, imagery and depth of this treasured piece my friend! For me this is a masterpiece I have now just read.. A fav and without any doubt IN MY MIND THIS IS A Super 10!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/29/2017 9:57:00 AM
Coming from a master, that is really kind, Robert. Thank you.
Date: 8/26/2017 8:12:00 AM
Very beautiful poem Sunlite!:) Great imagery from start to last line of it. Sure enjoyed reading it. A fav!:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)) D.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/29/2017 12:20:00 PM
I thought I had thanked you, Dorian. If not, I do so now, and congratulate you on your beautiful poetry.
Date: 8/24/2017 11:17:00 AM
Hi Sunlite, a piece of poetry that brings me peace as i read. A most creative write. This is an excellent write and i have already read it again here. The images are beautiful. May your pen ever run gold. This has to be laced in my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/24/2017 6:14:00 PM
You are so, so kind!!!
Date: 8/23/2017 12:57:00 PM
A very creative and beautiful work! I enjoyed it very much :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for such a nice comment!
Date: 8/23/2017 11:17:00 AM
Nice comparison between a person and a tree. This is very creative.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:08:00 PM
Appreciate your insight. Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2017 8:29:00 PM
Beautifully penned my friend...goodbye summer...hell-o winter lol...god bless...^WW^
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:09:00 PM
God bless you, too. Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2017 6:39:00 PM
Just beautiful sunlite. I am a summer girl at heart yet the gorgeous colours of autumn are mesmerizing. I adore the spiritual feel of your poem and the quiet it inspires to be grateful for all of our blessings in every season. a fave
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:10:00 PM
Your comments are very welcome!!!
Date: 8/21/2017 4:21:00 PM
I hope more than one... lovely poetry
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:10:00 PM
Thank you much much, Tim!
Date: 8/21/2017 3:57:00 PM
Brilliant Sunlite, no pun intended, not a bad way to exit, out in a blaze of color...
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for your insight, Charlie.
Date: 8/21/2017 1:05:00 PM
So well written and a lovely depiction of the effects of cold and fall.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:12:00 PM
Appreciate your kindness!
Date: 8/21/2017 12:31:00 PM
Such a melancholy time Autumn...even admidst all the blazing colour! How are you keeping these days, Sunlite? Well -- I hope! Thought it was time to call in and pay my regards. All my very best wishes! :) john P.s Charming little poem. :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:13:00 PM
Wow, John, how nice to hear from you!
Date: 8/21/2017 11:37:00 AM
What a great poem Sunlite. I can feel the sadness and wish for more life as you ended it!! Well done :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!

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