On the Elevator

The elevator stopped as I stood in place
A well endowed woman jumped on, at a fast pace
As I stared on
She said, "Please press one"
So I did, and she slapped my face!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bauer Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 5:01 PM
ha! this is hilarious, pat!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Oh, my goodness! Funny in theory, in reality, I cannot truthfully imagine how fast she would have you down on the ground crying for help.
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 4:04 PM
You underestimate how fast I can run my friend!!!......The size of the elevator might be a problem though!!........ok good point!!.........80)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Hello Pat, she must have had a good reason. Good photo. have a nice day my friend.
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Yeah....hmmmm.....well I can't imagine what?!?.....80)
Leffanta Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Great photo, too! Aloha! Rico
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:59 PM
I know right? I got lucky with that one on the first page of the search!!........Thanks for commenting Rico!
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Women! They're like that, Pat! LOL
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Yeah what are ya gonna do??........80)
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Ouch lol
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Perfectly natural misunderstanding! (Well maybe not perfectly!)............pat
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 7:45 AM
LOL! ;) tsk tsk x
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Glad you liked it! (Even with the finger wagging!)....80)
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