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On the Elevator

The elevator stopped as I stood in place A well endowed woman jumped on, at a fast pace As I stared on She said, "Please press one" So I did, and she slapped my face!

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/27/2018 5:01:00 PM

ha! this is hilarious, pat!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2018 3:14:00 PM

Oh, my goodness! Funny in theory, in reality, I cannot truthfully imagine how fast she would have you down on the ground crying for help.

Pat Adams
Date: 9/27/2018 4:04:00 PM

You underestimate how fast I can run my friend!!!......The size of the elevator might be a problem though!!........ok good point!!.........80)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/27/2018 2:36:00 PM

Hello Pat, she must have had a good reason. Good photo. have a nice day my friend.

Pat Adams
Date: 9/27/2018 4:02:00 PM

Yeah....hmmmm.....well I can't imagine what?!?.....80)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/27/2018 1:40:00 PM

Great photo, too! Aloha! Rico

Pat Adams
Date: 9/27/2018 3:59:00 PM

I know right? I got lucky with that one on the first page of the search!!........Thanks for commenting Rico!

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/27/2018 10:00:00 AM

Women! They're like that, Pat! LOL

Pat Adams
Date: 9/27/2018 3:58:00 PM

Yeah what are ya gonna do??........80)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/27/2018 9:36:00 AM

Ouch lol

Pat Adams
Date: 9/27/2018 3:58:00 PM

Perfectly natural misunderstanding! (Well maybe not perfectly!)............pat

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/27/2018 7:45:00 AM

LOL! ;) tsk tsk x

Pat Adams
Date: 9/27/2018 3:56:00 PM

Glad you liked it! (Even with the finger wagging!)....80)