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On the Eighth Day...

Bronze refulgence heats
womb waters to expel their
Crusted eggs of bone.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2010 6:22:00 PM

nice shine of reflection of the past I suppose. Got a very different outlook on you Haiku. Hope it is about dinos. Not sure, maybe you can inlighten me. by the way thank you for your comments Gerard. Well done and recived on the haiku poem, have a wonderful and safe Memorial day, Sidney Lee Ann M. =p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 5:57:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes the first three notes of In My Life is C,D,E ..The first cord is G....Sara

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 9:11:00 AM

Thanks also for your abundant support in your comment today on my poetry Gerard. Yes a great change is coming and it will be of the higher state of the Agape power. Thanks, Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:13:00 AM

Congrats on your success in contest, Gerard. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 7:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win. nice haiku

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/28/2010 9:44:00 PM

Interesting wording! Gerard! Very creative and original. Looks like congratulations are in order with your win for Raul's contest. Thanks also for your kind comments on my poetry lately. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:44:00 PM

Last I heard Gerard.. McNabb wants to go to Chicago, his old home town, and Vick is supposed to be traded too and they intend to start Kevin Kobb... one of my sons is a stone Eagles fan so he keeps me informed.. but watching ESPN faithfully this is the scuttlebutt I hear nightly... do u ever watch PTI? Pardon the Interruption .. with Tony Kornheiser and Mike Wilbaun? those guys are great and nuts.. my pick this year... GIANTS.. who do u like my friend? thankxxx for complimenting my skills luv

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2010 5:46:00 PM

Wow! What a terrific imagination and unique look at Raul's picture!! I love your twist in this contest, Gerard. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2010 5:07:00 PM

Gerard, "Imagine" was in my mind as I was writing the poem. Thanks for picking up on it. Love, Carolyn

Date: 3/28/2010 1:09:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:34:00 AM

Hey Gerard, I knew this was a winner!! Congratulations to you...Enjoy...Peace, love,

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 10:34:00 AM

Very nice Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/28/2010 8:50:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:33:00 AM

Gerard, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > with this tremendous Haiku >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 6:59:00 AM

Congrats Gerard on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest with this magnificent Haiku full of beauty and detailed elegance.. enjoy your trip to the winners circle... see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Gerard. Love Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/28/2010 4:15:00 AM

Gerard, my congratulations on your winning this contest. The beauty of nature attracts in a solemn way. (^_^) Noel.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2010 2:25:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry today Gerard. It was a very enjoyable poem and I wish you the best in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2010 2:21:00 PM

Excellent imagery here, Gerard! I know this a win..I like it..Mine is so-so..but I looked and looked...even got crossed-eyed, looking! lol Anyway, I tried...thanks for your very kind comments, my friend...especially for my Jimmy..Love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2010 2:01:00 PM

How clever, Gerard! What an amazing description of the photo. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

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