On the Edge

On The Edge

He lay flat on the floor
On the edge of his mind's cliff
Taking notes
Wondering
is this life worth living

He tried to remember
Grasp onto
Happier times
Shadows of light
Fluttered beyond his grasp
Teasing
Evaporating
Hiding
Figments wrapped in glittering paper
Promising
Tempting
Geometrically angled
Away from him

He felt the coolness of the tile
Terracotta pressing against his forehead
Soothing
Absorbing his fever
Steadying him
Whispering 
Promising relief
"Let your blood accentuate my redness"
" I will protect your bones"

Light flows through stained glass 
Christ's brilliant blue eyes
Piercing his sadness
Reassuring him
There will be more days
Brighter lights
Warmth not clay
Sadness shall be left to yesterday
The floor will not be fed today
It is washed with his salty tears
The edge vanishes
Was it ever there?
One moment 
Graciously
Turned to years
He sits in a pew
Looks up away from himself
It now seems so clear

He gets up
Walks across the floor
Walks out the silent door
Deciding once and for all
He doesn't need
Or want
This horrid place
Any more

His heart is healed
God goes where he goes
The suffering he lived no longer grows
What he remembers sets him free
He will not be lost to history
He chooses a life of Joy not misery.



Dedicated to native children abused in church and residential schools. 
Their culture was systematically stripped away. in some cases much worse
things happened behind what should have been hallowed walls. 

In writing this I question if this piece was honoring to Native people. As I thought about this I realized that this piece speaks to their resilience as a people. Despite what was done to them they have found a way to hold onto their culture traditions art and language. We have much that we can learn from them.

Written by: Richard J. Lamoureux

www.wisedummypoet.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Thanks Sara.
Rain Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 4:22 PM
This is a winning poem Richard , After I posted the winners , I then saw your name as HM , and others I love here. You are one of my Favorite poets here , and this is a favorite poem you gifted us with .Thank-you Richard for entering my contest , Shanity Rain. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Shanity, I was pleased to go back to your list and find my name.
A   Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Glad she decided to go back and add this one on her winning list... Or I would have had missed the poem... A very cool writes.. LINDA
Rain Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 4:24 PM
They all deserve wins !! We were gifted from the beginning , I love every poem :) after seeing a young new poetess , take 2nd , saying she only has won a contest 1 time before and was honored , It validated everything .All these talented writes!
Jordan Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Intense and powerful and tragically true. I'm adding it to my favorites. I posted Haiku 100... Jack
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Thank Jack I'm honored. On my way to check out 100!
Horsman Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Oh brilliant Richard yet sadly your excellent poem is only the tip of the ice burg
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Harry. You are right, that is a very sad thought.
Widjanarko Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Good afternoon Rick :D glad to read your heartfelt poem today :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Thanks Yanny.
Tacito Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:20 AM
Incredible. Just...incredible. I am speechless.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:40 AM
That's unusual, I can't imagine you being speechless. I hope that is not a condition that plagues you often as I find you very intresting and entertaining.
Manassian Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Goodmorning Richard....did you just add that last line? This is so heart wrenching...With such deep seated pain....there can only be real healing in Him....Powerful write....Bless you
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:38 AM
No, unless you read it while I was writing it yesterday. Thanks for the blessing!
Sirak Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 7:57 AM
A stunning portrayal of sadness that lingers on.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:36 AM
There are many in need of healing.
Seal Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Wherever there are vulnerable people, there will be those that abuse their trust. A heartfelt write Rick, unfortunately a true one. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 10:22 PM
It is a reality that haunts many, thanks for your thoughtful response.
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