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On the Edge

Hand in hand they stand On the edge of tomorrow Leaving the baggages behind Buried in a heap of broken dreams Interrupted aspirations That kept them chained captives Disengaging the doubts and fears Exploring new horizons Hand in hand they stand Forging a genuine friendship Released by the magic of time In whose keeping lies the key That opens and shuts all doors Answering only to its guardian Who prescribes the course of men Fulfilling his plans throughout the ages

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/16/2009 5:27:00 AM
Quite a metaphysical exposition that brings rich meaning to good poetry. Congratulations
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Date: 12/14/2009 1:39:00 PM
A superb piece you have penned here..intriguing and deeply thought provoking! Beautiful imagery captivates the reader and keeps them enthralled. A great message conveyed that we all need to have new beginnings and leave the past behind! Thanks so much for sharing! Also thanks for taking the time to read my writes! Your always kind comments are much appreciated! ~Mary
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Date: 12/14/2009 10:14:00 AM
Very nicely written.Thank you for your comment on my poem.
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Date: 12/14/2009 7:44:00 AM
Really strong flow to this write. just has a warm feeling to it just has a great feel to great job
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:14:00 AM
Very postive testament of your faith. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/13/2009 4:59:00 PM
nicley penned poem, enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:42:00 AM
Fine verse Audrey, i have enjoyed this piece this cold Sunday afternoon in Scotland >> James
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Date: 12/12/2009 9:10:00 PM
Thank you for your beautiful words this day. GM
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Date: 12/12/2009 4:03:00 PM
Old over... new starts... great poem .. powerful words .. enjoyed... blessings.. luv.. thankxxx for sharing and for your kind comments on my poetry... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/12/2009 1:23:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 12/12/2009 10:19:00 AM
New beginnings....it is never too late to make a fresh start, and even better if it's hand in hand with someone you care for and who cares for you. ~ Love, Carrie
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