Audrey Haick Poet Free verse

On the Edge

Hand in hand they stand
On the edge of tomorrow
Leaving the baggages behind
Buried in a heap of broken dreams
Interrupted aspirations
That kept them chained captives
Disengaging the doubts and fears
Exploring new horizons

Hand in hand they stand
Forging a genuine friendship
Released by the magic of time
In whose keeping lies the key
That opens and shuts all doors
Answering only to its guardian
Who prescribes the course of men
Fulfilling his plans throughout the ages

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L'Nass Shango December 16, 2009 at 5:27 AM Quite a metaphysical exposition that brings rich meaning to good poetry. Congratulations

Mary Meade Stephenson December 14, 2009 at 1:39 PM A superb piece you have penned here..intriguing and deeply thought provoking! Beautiful imagery captivates the reader and keeps them enthralled. A great message conveyed that we all need to have new beginnings and leave the past behind! Thanks so much for sharing! Also thanks for taking the time to read my writes! Your always kind comments are much appreciated! ~Mary

Colleen Bono December 14, 2009 at 10:14 AM Very nicely written.Thank you for your comment on my poem.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo December 14, 2009 at 7:44 AM Really strong flow to this write. just has a warm feeling to it just has a great feel to great job

Sara Kendrick December 14, 2009 at 6:14 AM Very postive testament of your faith. Keep the pen flowing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse December 13, 2009 at 4:59 PM nicley penned poem, enjoyed reading today!

James Fraser December 13, 2009 at 8:42 AM Fine verse Audrey, i have enjoyed this piece this cold Sunday afternoon in Scotland >> James

Geoffery Mchugh December 12, 2009 at 9:10 PM Thank you for your beautiful words this day. GM

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 12, 2009 at 4:03 PM Old over... new starts... great poem .. powerful words .. enjoyed... blessings.. luv.. thankxxx for sharing and for your kind comments on my poetry... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Marty Owens December 12, 2009 at 1:23 PM Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading...Marty

Carrie Richards December 12, 2009 at 10:19 AM New beginnings....it is never too late to make a fresh start, and even better if it's hand in hand with someone you care for and who cares for you. ~ Love, Carrie