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On the Edge

Hand in hand they stand
On the edge of tomorrow
Leaving the baggages behind
Buried in a heap of broken dreams
Interrupted aspirations
That kept them chained captives
Disengaging the doubts and fears
Exploring new horizons

Hand in hand they stand
Forging a genuine friendship
Released by the magic of time
In whose keeping lies the key
That opens and shuts all doors
Answering only to its guardian
Who prescribes the course of men
Fulfilling his plans throughout the ages

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/16/2009 5:27:00 AM
Quite a metaphysical exposition that brings rich meaning to good poetry. Congratulations
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Date: 12/14/2009 1:39:00 PM
A superb piece you have penned here..intriguing and deeply thought provoking! Beautiful imagery captivates the reader and keeps them enthralled. A great message conveyed that we all need to have new beginnings and leave the past behind! Thanks so much for sharing! Also thanks for taking the time to read my writes! Your always kind comments are much appreciated! ~Mary
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Date: 12/14/2009 10:14:00 AM
Very nicely written.Thank you for your comment on my poem.
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Date: 12/14/2009 7:44:00 AM
Really strong flow to this write. just has a warm feeling to it just has a great feel to great job
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:14:00 AM
Very postive testament of your faith. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/13/2009 4:59:00 PM
nicley penned poem, enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:42:00 AM
Fine verse Audrey, i have enjoyed this piece this cold Sunday afternoon in Scotland >> James
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Date: 12/12/2009 9:10:00 PM
Thank you for your beautiful words this day. GM
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Date: 12/12/2009 4:03:00 PM
Old over... new starts... great poem .. powerful words .. enjoyed... blessings.. luv.. thankxxx for sharing and for your kind comments on my poetry... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/12/2009 1:23:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 12/12/2009 10:19:00 AM
New beginnings....it is never too late to make a fresh start, and even better if it's hand in hand with someone you care for and who cares for you. ~ Love, Carrie
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