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On the Edge

Lost in your own thoughts While you stand still on the edge Unmindful of what surrounds In silence you wait The sky almost overcast None seems to be forthcoming Watching from afar Distance standing between us Your image instilled on me With a heavy heart In the wind I will impart My message of last goodbye Theme Picture #3 18 July 2019

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/22/2019 8:56:00 AM

Good byes are always difficult. Congrats on your win.

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/23/2019 1:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeanne! Regards :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2019 5:23:00 AM

- One last goodbye is always difficult - Congratulations on your wonderful win, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/22/2019 6:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise! Most appreciated. Regards :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2019 3:01:00 PM

Sometimes our memories make an impression on us like a photograph and forever remain in our minds. You express this so well in your first place poem Elaine. Congratulations on your deserving win! : )

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/22/2019 3:16:00 AM

Hi Connie, thank you for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciated. Regards :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/21/2019 2:26:00 PM

A poignant write Elaine..Congrat on your win..

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/22/2019 3:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph for my placement in your contest. Really appreciate it. Best regards :)