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On the Edge

Lost in your own thoughts
While you stand still on the edge
Unmindful of what surrounds
In silence you wait
The sky almost overcast
None seems to be forthcoming

Watching from afar
Distance standing between us
Your image instilled on me
With a heavy heart
In the wind I will impart
My message of last goodbye


Theme Picture #3
18 July 2019

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Date: 7/22/2019 8:56:00 AM
Good byes are always difficult. Congrats on your win.
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Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/23/2019 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne! Regards :)
Date: 7/22/2019 5:23:00 AM
- One last goodbye is always difficult - Congratulations on your wonderful win, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/22/2019 6:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise! Most appreciated. Regards :)
Date: 7/21/2019 3:01:00 PM
Sometimes our memories make an impression on us like a photograph and forever remain in our minds. You express this so well in your first place poem Elaine. Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
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Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/22/2019 3:16:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciated. Regards :)
Date: 7/21/2019 2:26:00 PM
A poignant write Elaine..Congrat on your win..
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Elaine Gonzales
Date: 7/22/2019 3:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph for my placement in your contest. Really appreciate it. Best regards :)