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Image result for pictures of christmas trees that have fallen while decorated One Christmas and my only Christmas that this happened, the Christmas tree fell about three times and on the day after Christmas it fell again. I took that tree down and threw it out. Good ridence ..

On the Day After Christmas

On the day after Christmas, bam! The tree hit the floor once again That was it, all I could stand, wham! Ornaments in the attic slain
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Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 2:35 PM
too bad this did not get entered in my contest. It was GREAT
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Andrea, Your acknowledgement that it is great is enough. I was not sure about the meter especially the last line. Don't do meter. LOL..I guess I just don't have rhythm. I am grateful for your visit. Sara
Jayasankar Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Oh God.. loved reading this... you did the best thing Sara...Lol. Hope you had a lovely Christmas...Hugs ~ Ani
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Anitha, Thanks for the nice comment. I am glad you got a laugh. Sara
Roper Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Oh, my, Sara, kitty kat have had to do it... Great imagery and word choice. Merry Christmas. Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Eve, Still have idea what actually happened but it was one of those things that one would not want to happen again. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Nice work on Boxing Day. ~~
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Victor, It was a job that had to be done and someone had to do it. LOL..I should have gotten a reward. Sara
Evans Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 10:32 PM
The 2020 effect right?
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Ricky, Probably. I think it was probably 20 years ago, well, maybe over thirty years ago. Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Hello Sara Kendrick, that tree must havve been very heavy to fall. Three times it fell. I would bring down stairs and forget it. Then enjoy the rest of the day. merry Christmas. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Hello Sara, yes you are right we do learn lessons along the way in life. I am glad that the tree that fell 3 times is in thza\ past. Happy New Year. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Darlene, I am glad that is in the past. Life issues us some unusual happenings sometimes. I think we learn lessons all along the way from those happenings. I hope this Christmas Day is a great one for you. Sara
Y. Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Hi Sara, I wonder why that kept happening? I enjoyed your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas Eve.Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Alexis, I have no idea but I think maybe it was the stand that was holding it up was damaged or bent. I bought a new stand the next year and I have not had that happen again. I am needing another new stand but I did not even put up a tree this year. I did put out the Nativity Scene and a few other decorations maybe next year. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Sara, I think that Christmas tree was haunted. I am glad you gave it the heave ho. merry Christmas.
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Caren, Well, I had even tied it by a string to the wall and it still fell. The nail and string were on the floor as well. LOL..Something was definitely wrong. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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