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August 17, 2023
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 38 – Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title: On the Crest of a Wave


 

On the Crest of a Wave

Navigating vast oceans of life, negotiating its lows and highs,
Some blissful of pure joy, some burdened in griefs and sighs,
Riding aspirations eternal, rowing vigor of happiness I ride,
Undulating on tides of love, with your smile gracing my side.

On the crest of a wave, surging with gale, O, fondly we sail,
Reveling life’s sweetest moments, dreams amorous unveil,
Sketching themes periwinkle, tinting blush of rosy twilight,
Whispering secrets passionate, pleading to romantic night.

As stars above twinkle, in harmony with melodies of skies,
Hearts sensuous bloom desires, inflaming enamored eyes,
Spurring moods of romance, Venus and the Moon revive,
Flirting with colorful nebulae, where passions stellar thrive.

Anticipation builds, propelling us with exuberance of seas,
As lands in yonder delight, where zephyrs of hope breeze,
Foretelling of an ebullient morning, inscribing motifs of glee,
Glistening skyline golden, where promises auspicious spree.

Approaching our destination, we foresee realms of morrow,
Devoid of hurricanes of yore, devoid of miseries of sorrow,
Having parted stormy coastline battered in travails of throes,
Exiting cheerless shadows, vying winsome, sunlit meadows.
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Beaufort Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Vijay, I am realizing that your poems are like a journey. It's a wonderful style of writing and I've indicated it is really a pleasure to follow along. I picked this one to read--the title appealed to me. Have you listened to Livin' Thing by the Electric Light Orchestra (ELO)? The lyrics talk about the magic of sailing away on the crest of a wave.
Meadows Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Beautifully written. Well done. Congratulations on your win.
Kauffman Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Vijay, congratulations on having the #1 new poem! Your signature talent for imagery and unique poetic expression rises to the top in this masterfully created metaphoric poem. So happy for you. Blessings!
B. Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Absolutely love this work of fine art, my friend.. Had me completely mesmerized! Really enjoyed this, Vijay. A warm Congratulations! Many blessings to you, dear friend!
Ibeh Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 8:32 PM
Vijay, this is yet another masterpiece from you! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:29 PM
What a masterful write Vijay, one of your best, congrats on number 1 of top 100, very worthy no doubt!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:57 PM
Vijay, you never let me down, but take me with you too," as fondly sail." Congrats again, to a poet I enjoy reading.
Kauffman Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 10:33 AM
Lovely write, Jijay flowing with metaphors and vivid images of two lover's journey sailing into that far, safe harbor of "sunlit meadows! Big congratulations on your win!
Ashley Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Dear Vijay, your dramatic and dynamic pen rises to ride the crest of the wave with elegant finesse. A poetic journey filled with potent imagery, flirtation, romance and happiness realized. Congratulations for your excellent wins with this exquisite gem. Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Your illumative journey is filled with such romance and sensuous emotion, it is absolutely stunning my friend. Congratulations Vijay! :)
Sharma  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:14 PM
Back here to congratulate you on your magnificent win in the contest, truly so well deserved, this is profound!
Ball Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:07 PM
As always Vijay this is absolutely beautiful. Here you describe the journey of life with the love of your life by your side. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Lindley Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:20 AM
My friend the profound thoughts and fantastic imagery in this fine poem is amazing. A definitive gleaming gem and new fav for me. A pleasure to read! God bless you.
Kannan Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 1:20 AM
Wow!!! Rhythmically beautiful!!! Loved reading the romantic verses.... A winner for sure...
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Much appreciate, Supraja. Many thanks for stopping by.
Nuwas Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Very well composed poem, enjoyed the read :)
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Many thanks Aysha--glad to see you again. Much appreciate.
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:37 AM
WOW! Such a vividly descriptive, romantic piece. Janice
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Many thanks Janice. Always appreciate your kind remarks.
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Lots of romantic gorgeous imagery. Sure to do well with the sponsor
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Much appreciate, Andrea. Many thanks for stopping by.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 12:10 PM
You take us on a journey with gusto. Magnificent poem.
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate.
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Oh how breathtaking and profound is this piece.. So extraordinarily crafted with pristine wordsmithery and elegant phraseology.. The rhyming flow here makes this piece sound so mellifluous and enchanting.. The depth truly took me on a journey where the amalgamation of delicate descriptions, imageries and emotions created a heartfelt poetic ambience.. So thoughtful and self-reflective..
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:29 AM
I am honored to receive such wonderful feedback from a gifted poet. You are an exceptionally talented writer, Hiya. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.
Tor Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Vijay what a marvelous piece you have written for the contest. Your words, theme, and emotional journey through life takes us on a journey with you experiencing every wave and emotion in dealing with. This is definitely a favorite and I am always amazed how you are gven a theme to write on and you just take it to another level of expression. A gifted writer you are and all who read your works realize the endless talent you have been gifted. Thank you for your effort in writing this epic write.
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:27 AM
My dear friend, I always enjoy reading your heartfelt comments. You bring joy to everyone you visit on Poetry Soup. I am honored to read your glowing remarks and receive your FAVE. You are a reservoir of goodwill. Many thanks, Michael.
Empress Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Your poem flows with such brilliant rhymes and profound thoughts , and experiences of life flowing in an introspective as well as thoughtful manner. I really love how you’ve used the prompt here and how you’ve written is so good. Your imagery and descriptive use of language makes you a fave here on soup loved this
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:24 AM
You are the new star on Poetry Soup horizon. Thank you for gracing my page with your comments. Looking forward to reading more of your splendid work.
Volumes Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:13 AM
A terrific poem Vijay. The images you conjure are sheer poetry. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:23 AM
So glad to hear that. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:44 AM
May you reach those beautiful meadows that lie in your mind dear friend, may all your sorrows be small and your joys, majestically so, have a blessed day . :)
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thank you for your graceful words my friend. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 6:29 AM
A beautiful dream you have crafted Vijay! Full of imagery in your romantic style, you take the reader on the ride with you in hopes of finding our own 'crest of a wave" Happy Saturday!
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:21 AM
So very kind of you, Mike. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Legros Kelley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 2:25 PM
Vijay, your poem is so beautiful, it has brought tears to my eyes. I cannot in words describe how deeply this incredible, jewel of a poem has touched my heart! You are an amazing poet. This is a fave if ever there were one. <3
Pandit Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 4:30 AM
So very kind of you, as always, my friend. Much appreciate your insights, BJ. Many thanks for your visit and comments. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
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