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February 14th that special day must i say i love you in that special way? nay my witnesses undoubtedly declair that there must be something there such as the sun who says i cast a shadow over you and the moon who says my love must be true and each and every falling star whom i've wished upon my love where ever you are the rose who's splinder giveth it self to thee from me and the chocolates in a heart shaped box saying "i do not love you little, but a lot." and February 14th that special day must i say i love you in that special way? "nay" but 365 days of the year you should hear "I love you" whispered in your ear 52 times, once for each week my lips should touch you on the cheek 7 days, seven days a week i'm humbled and i am weak 24 hours of each and every day my love is your love not just holidays

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Date: 2/11/2010 1:14:00 PM
Marvellous poem,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Love poem indeed,,Charma
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Date: 2/10/2010 9:38:00 PM
Dear John, Outstanding LOVE in this Superior'POEM YOU Romantic ; YOU ALWAYS... HG --- John I was Looking for An " End Line Word " form of POETRY as YOU said in YOUR Comment to Doris Culverhouse's POEM " Day Light " " I'll have to try It " I await YOUR" End LINE Word " Artistry ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:37:00 PM
Have it printed up on to a card and give it to your love on valentines day. sweet sentiments, nice read... cheers Margaret thank you for your kind words to me.
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:07:00 PM
Hi, John, you should convert this into a song lyric. It has the feel of a great 60's soul ballad. Thank you for your kind words. My wife loves you and the mention of your name. I'm in some trouble here, as I have to outdo your kind critique. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:09:00 AM
Your special love should enjoy this write on this special day. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:06:00 AM
Sensational love poem John. You are such a sweetheart. Big hugs to you. Thank you for posting and sharing this poem with us all today. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2010 4:32:00 AM
John you romantic you great poem, will have them all at your feet, thanks for comments Daniel
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:51:00 PM
Excellent poetry for this lovers holiday upon us... such emotional words and being a woman I totally agree.. 365 days a year to hear ..I luv u... its never enough times to hear it... u have captured the magic of the meaning of luv... thankxxx for enjoying Yearning... I would definitely be yearning for the luv u wrote of in this lovely poem.. a new favorite tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:38:00 PM
A romantic poem well expressed, John.
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:34:00 PM
exactly!! you are sweet heart approved!!
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