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Premiere Contest Winneron such divine evenings -

aye …

on such
divine evenings, thus,
are perfect odes not freely spun?
the Perseids, dancing their
jocund jigs -
capricious, evanescent stripes of
golden ire under a tapestry
of wonders …
watching rapt, ever-attentive,
streaking, burning ephemeral, as if the
gods themselves trace their
fingertips gently on
a phosphorescent brine …
but this, yet,
a sea of suns, amaranthine …
I wonder, could it be …
they are fleeting?
the hopes of idle angels, perhaps,
dying bright in the veil of Zion -
plunging to the earth
as if mortal …
perchance, they're pearls of Sol -
strands of liquid morning,
to adorn, pure, the breast of Heaven …
could be …
they're forsaken souls -
lost spirits, given one last chance to
burn their id on the firmament …
or even yet …
the wondrous wishes of children,
sparking to life in the midst of
their deepest dreaming,
and then … gone …
oh, surely,
it must be that,
their bright, momentary glory can
be meant for ONLY such
tender fancies,
the imaginings of youth,
the one fit and worthy vessel for
such runes …
and I, but their ever-willing caretaker …
picking each one from
the fiery vault like precious
gems from a parcel,
and plopping them, sweet,?
into the deep, soft pocket of my joys … thus,
on such divine evenings ...

aye!






~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Shooting Stars" Poetry Contest, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Your Choice (5), Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile One" Poetry Contest, Mark Toney, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Cosmos" Poetry Contest, Thvia Shetley, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 4th Place ~ in the "Spring" Poetry Contest, Craig Cornish, Judge & Sponsor.

~ Poem of the Day ~  on Poetry Soup.com, awarded August 7, 2017.
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Carber Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Congrats on you much deserved 1st, Greg-- my praise from last year stands resolute.
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Barden Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 3:28 AM
Thank you very much, Line! :-) <3
Ashley Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Gregory, I enjoyed being captured by your beautifully expressive contemplations that gently stroked my imagination and elated my heart. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season, my friend.. ~Susan
Barden Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 3:28 AM
Thank you so very much, Susan, your opinion is important to me, and I'm so pleased you liked my poem! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Toney Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 11:28 PM
Congrats, Greg, on your first place win on Mile 1 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. You had me at the end when your poem shifted to “the wishes of children.” Awesome :). ~Mark
Barden Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 3:27 AM
Thank you so kindly, Mark, I was SO honored by this - and surprised! Blessed to be on a list with such wonderful writers, and humbled by my placement ... I can't believe I missed this thank you until now, lol. Blessings! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:30 PM
A lovely poem, Gregory. Congrats on your high ranking.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 3:52 AM
Thank you so much, Line! :-) <3
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Congrats, Gregory,on your win-- I was even more impressed by this poem than when I read it last year-- you have touched on how the divine, the immortal, may interweave with nature:'..to sign their id...', etc. It is a poem that deepens on re-readings, because it is a poem of mystery, of mysticism....
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 3:51 AM
This is such a wonderful comment, LJ, and I'm so sorry I didn't see it until now ... this means a great deal to me, and I'm so pleased you found it so worthy of praise. Blessings, friend! :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:33 PM
mo <3
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:51 PM
greg <3
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:10 PM
A wonderfully emotive write Gregory.
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Very kind of you, James, and I thank you so much, my friend! :-)
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:10 PM
A wonderfully emotive write Gregory.
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Very kind of you, James, and I thank you so much, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Back again, Gregory, to congratulate you once more on another fine win for this outstanding 'heavenly' spring poem. Sandra :)
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, I so greatly appreciate the kind comments! :-) <3
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your placement win with this heavenly poem. I'm still enthralled with your 'way with words'. Enjoyed this. :)
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:48 PM
You're very sweet, Susan, and I'm so thankful for your kind comments, my friend! :-) <3
Cornish Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Greg, you continue to be a master of words and I'm not at all surprised to find you amidst the best.
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thank you so much, Craig - I'm honored and humbled to be on a list with such wonderful poets!
Richards Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 1:35 PM
This is a lovely Ode to Spring......and instead of most who think of flowers and green, you took us to the heavens! Heavenly it was ! Congrats to you, Gregory !
Barden Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Thank you so much, Carrie, that's very kind - I'm glad you liked the direction I took this in. Blessings! :-) <3
Carber Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 10:26 AM
I like this very, very much-- it pulls one in, never an easy thing to do....
Barden Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you so much, LJ - I greatly appreciate the kind words, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Exquisite, Gregory! Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra
Barden Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Thank you so very much, Sandra, I greatly appreciate that, my friend! Blessings!
Hamilton Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Congrats on another wonderful write and another number 1 win, I would say that you are finally getting recognized Greg, and in a big way...that's what happens to gifted ones.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:11 PM
Thanks so much, John - You are too, too kind my good friend, and I so appreciate the kindness - if not for your encouragement I would probably not be here now, and I have been so blessed by all the friendship you and others have shown me. Just on a lucky streak with contests, I think, as I had a blank streak there for a while. :-)
Krampe Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Congrats on your top win, Gregory. Truly a lovely poem. I must have missed the POTD - belated congrats for that as well.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:08 PM
That's very kind of you, Agnes, thank you! POTD was Aug 7. Blessings, friend! <3
White Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 4:05 AM
Grats my dear friend. Nice trophy :)
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:06 PM
And many kind thanks to you, Buddy - I so appreciate it! :-) <3
Warrior Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Congrats my friend...simply divine...first place again lol...you have the golden magic touch...like King Midas...god bless...*WW*
Warrior Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 1:01 AM
And congrats on potd too...yahoo!..your friend...WW
Carmack Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 11:49 PM
Impressive Greg.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Thanks so much, Rob!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 10:58 PM
And I'm back again! You hit this one out of the park and past the moon :) Congratulations on your first place finish Greg, Stellar! xomo
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Thank you so much, Mo, you are very sweet, my friend ... so glad you liked this one! :-) <3
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations, Greg on your grand win and wonderful placement with equally wonderful poem.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Oh, thank you so much, my friend, that's very kind ... so pleased you enjoyed it, Subimal! :-)
Shetley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Congratulations on earning first place in my contest The Cosmos. You nailed it with this piece. It is the exact fusion of poetry and the cosmos I was looking for. Truly stunning write that took my breath away. Saving to my favorites.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:59 PM
Thank you SO very much, Thvia, I am so honored and humbled by the placement in your contest! Blessings to you - it put a smile on my face! :-)
Chan Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 11:27 AM
This is one of the best writes I've read on Poetry Soup so far. Truly inspired and full of wonders. Enchanting.
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Thank you very kindly, Bernard - I'm honored that you found my little gem worthy! Blessings! :-)
Ashley Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Your poetic prowess and magical musings are heavenly Greg. This celestial beauty is gorgeous on the surface and deep in the Soul. Congrats with POTD honors with this sparkling gem :)
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Thank you so very much, Susan, that's very sweet of you - blessings, my friend! :-)
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