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As a door is tied to its hinge The lazy are tied to their lounge When the diligent will prosper Sure, the lazy ones will suffer
July.6.2022 Sin of Sloth Poetry Contest Sponsor- MargaritaLillico

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Date: 7/12/2022 1:36:00 PM
Good logic in this contest entry, Valsa. The ying yang of life. Bill
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Date: 7/12/2022 3:41:00 AM
Lovely Valsa;in but a few words.
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Date: 7/11/2022 1:12:00 PM
I love your analogy. Excellent fun. Ann
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Date: 7/9/2022 8:22:00 PM
Valsa, You've captured sloth in vivid metaphor + image. Your short piece inspires me to get moving. A fine write! Sincerest regards, Brian
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Date: 7/6/2022 9:31:00 PM
Little peeks at the story of the ants and the grasshoppers/cicadas here. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 7/6/2022 12:43:00 PM
Truly and truly sad!
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Date: 7/6/2022 11:18:00 AM
What happened in a previous life that would cause them to fear change? Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/6/2022 6:16:00 AM
I loved your great rhyming poem, Valsa. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/6/2022 5:46:00 AM
A lesson in life to live by, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 7/6/2022 2:33:00 AM
Great metaphoric write, dear Valsa. Much to learn.
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