Valsa George Poet Rhyme

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On Sloth

As a door is tied to its hinge
The lazy are tied to their lounge
When the diligent will prosper
Sure, the lazy ones will suffer


July.6.2022

Sin of Sloth Poetry Contest
Sponsor- MargaritaLillico

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Bill Baker July 12, 2022 at 1:36 PM Good logic in this contest entry, Valsa. The ying yang of life. Bill

Caren Krutsinger July 12, 2022 at 3:41 AM Lovely Valsa;in but a few words.

Ann Foster July 11, 2022 at 1:12 PM I love your analogy. Excellent fun. Ann

Brian Sambourne July 9, 2022 at 8:22 PM Valsa, You've captured sloth in vivid metaphor + image. Your short piece inspires me to get moving. A fine write! Sincerest regards, Brian

Gershon Wolf July 6, 2022 at 9:31 PM Little peeks at the story of the ants and the grasshoppers/cicadas here. Smiles, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues July 6, 2022 at 12:43 PM Truly and truly sad!

Rico Leffanta July 6, 2022 at 11:18 AM What happened in a previous life that would cause them to fear change? Enjoyed!

Sotto Poet July 6, 2022 at 6:16 AM I loved your great rhyming poem, Valsa. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit July 6, 2022 at 5:46 AM A lesson in life to live by, Valsa. Best to you.

Victor Buhagiar July 6, 2022 at 2:33 AM Great metaphoric write, dear Valsa. Much to learn.