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On Silent Moor

The chill of autumn
Initiates spiral breath
Precariously
Buoyant upon frigid air
Penetrates the heart of mist.

© Harry J Horsman  2011

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Sara Kendrick

February 1, 2023 at 6:34 AM

Amazing how that breath always shows upon that cold air. I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Red Fiery

January 2, 2012 at 9:34 AM

the heart of mist...how lovely ur words flows... like a beautiful plant that grows cheers !!!!!!

Elizabeth Wesley

November 14, 2011 at 6:19 PM

Beautifully done Harry, gives cold weather a touch of beauty not found in other seasons. Love your last line, it stays with me! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 25, 2011 at 3:34 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

September 24, 2011 at 12:11 AM

Interesting writing Harry. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kim Merryman

September 23, 2011 at 9:52 PM

Good one, Harry. Congrats on your win! Kim

Connie Marcum Wong

September 23, 2011 at 9:31 PM

Gave me chills harry. Congratulations on your wonderful win.

Ralph Taylor

September 23, 2011 at 7:19 PM

Congrats on your win, Mate. Awesome. Good on ya. Have a great weekend. Ralph

Bob Quigley

September 23, 2011 at 11:04 AM

Congratulations on your win Harry

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