On Seeing a Painting By Picasso

On Seeing a Painting by Picasso

By Elton Camp

The museum has a portrait by Picasso on display
When I heard that, I knew had to go by that way
I must admit that, a country hick like me
Has few chances a real work of art to see

The first painting I saw caused me to smile
It obviously was the work of a little child
A real talent for painting the child had not
Yet the museum gave it a prominent spot

In time the child might learn to draw
When better examples of art it saw
Now derisive laughter the kid might hear
If it came to visit and was standing near

I had to hope most folks won’t mind
To a little one’s work to try to be kind
An attempt to paint a woman it seemed to be
But it certainly looked very strange to me

One eye was looking over to her right
While the other had a straight sight
The nose was not located in between
In the place of an ear it could be seen

Mouth wasn’t at the center of her chin
Way over toward the side it did begin
The figure’s hair wasn’t up on the top
Way down to the left side it did drop

Her face was littered with weird designs
Composed of many multiple colored lines
I hoped nobody the child would ask
If it was a horrid Halloween mask

Of that painting I had quite enough
I was ready to see the genuine stuff
“Guard, where may the Picasso be found
So I won’t have to hunt for it all around?”

My question seemed the guard to confuse
Or perhaps I should say it came to amuse
His words to me were such a total surprise
“That is it, right there before your eyes.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/24/2012 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Elton. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:19:00 AM
Hey Carol, I was really surprised to see this one show up after having been posted so long. Thanks for noticing. Elton
Date: 5/21/2012 9:02:00 AM
I feel this way about much of modern music. It seems, though, that if one participates in the particular genre, things become clearer, even likeable. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:07:00 PM
Thanks. I submitted this poem a long time back and am surprised that it was picked. I saw a real Picasso only once, when a traveling exhibit was in Birmingham. I was "underwhelmed." But I am sure not qualified as an art "critic." Elton
Date: 11/8/2010 1:08:00 PM
picasso! i'm a fan of this cubist artist.. bit you witty pen painted a new perspective on the guy, elton .. impressive, funny!! :) warmest, nette
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