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On Second Thought

For wisdom I thought sacred texts would suffice
Then I bowed my head and began to think twice
Some may take offence
But two thousand years hence
I pray those folks don't look back to us for advice

11/23/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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November 25, 2022 at 4:41 AM
I’m a bit confused Robert, who exactly are you praying to lol, this is brilliant, cheers David
Gorelick Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 5:45 PM
Common vernacular signifying nothing! Cheers to you David, I always enjoy your level-headed approach. Robert
Wolf Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 9:01 PM
Nothing and no one like Mr. Bean to turn anything into a head-scratcher. (Turn this one upside down, ok?!)
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 8:13 PM
When I used to teach, I changed the 'Dean's List' into 'Mr. Bean's List.' The goof-offs loved it. Gave 'em something to shoot for...
Gorelick Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 5:47 PM
He is my role model after all!
Boles Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 7:17 PM
They better not, we have not proven ourselves to be good role models! Well said Robert...ab
Gorelick Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 5:50 PM
They'll be sorry, hope for change by then! Thanks for the encouragement ab and keep on playing those tunes we are fond of! Robert
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