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On Santa's Knee

All hopes and wishes

   for the perfect Christmas gift

      ....told on Santa's knee



As Santa bestows

     the gift of a candy cane

          ....a list is given

holidayi do not know?

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Robert Pettit

January 11, 2011 at 8:58 PM

Francine, it looks as if you have a double senryu poem here. It is quite descriptive despite the relatively few words you have here.

James Fraser

December 18, 2010 at 2:40 PM

I can still recall writing out my Christmas lists when I was younger. It sure was a trick way to practise my writing. Nice memories in this Francine >> James :)