On Rusted Wings

On these rusted wings I fall. All hopes for our reunion buried beneath soil, fearing my dearest will return no more. So I wait one week ... one month ... one year. listening with an ear towards thehorizon, hearing no reply but still remaining faithful. I sit here in an empty room, recalling those precious times we spent in each-others gaze. And as my tired eyes grow heavy, I slowly drift ... drift ... drift. Weaving my fingers through your ambrosial hair, we closed our eyes, and our lips locked, but when they opened I lie awake in bed alone. wishing you were here; wishing we could soar together once again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Daniel F. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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March 28, 2011 at 1:11 AM
amazing Daniel....i loved reading this one today.........
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February 3, 2011 at 6:33 PM
a lovely write Daniel, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
Christian Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 10:49 AM
aww nice work. as the saying goes always something better around the corner, God has a plan for everyone. God bless
Anderson Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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