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On Pinions They Rose To Great Height

I heard them call before dawn's light
Avian flocks filling the sky
Time for annual migration

On pinions they rose to great height
For a shift in weather was nigh
Keeping their V-shaped formation

Observing them was a delight
How swiftly they took wing to fly
Towards a warmer location

Nature gave them the keen foresight
A journey they dare not belie
For months of Winter's duration

Innate sense of seasonal change    
'cross miles of geographic range  



June 13, 2023
Trilonnet Contest ~ Image #4
Sponsor: Joseph May
Tools: rhymzone and howmanysyllables

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Joseph May Date: 6/25/2023 5:01:00 PM Congrats on your win Lin, Wonderful write Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/25/2023 5:59:00 PM Thank you very much, Joseph.

Sotto Poet Date: 6/14/2023 9:15:00 AM The image is aesthetically pleasing and the explanation of the migration process is superb. Lin you have effectively conveyed the message and the use of rhyme is great. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/14/2023 10:00:00 AM Your reviews are always reason to make me smile. Thanks, Lasaad.

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/14/2023 12:49:00 AM Wonderful writing, Lin:) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/14/2023 10:00:00 AM Thanks a bunch, Jo.

Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2023 1:35:00 PM Your interpretation of the image is superb, would be a great addition to a nature book Lin, I've just posted mine - same image different theme ! Great minds think alike my friend:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/13/2023 1:37:00 PM Not sure about our minds being great but we sure do think alike on many things. Thanks, Jan!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/13/2023 11:05:00 AM A lovely write/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day................ Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/13/2023 11:52:00 AM Thanks, Paula. Your comments are always welcome.

David Kavanagh Date: 6/13/2023 9:02:00 AM An ethereal opening to this one Lin, then that innate sense to migrate sets in, I get that same feeling each winter to head towards Hawaii, unfortunately I must brave it out for now, great one for the contest, beautifully written, cheers David Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/13/2023 9:39:00 AM Unless it's Maui, stay put. My winter's are mild enough not to want to head anywhere. Thank you for such accolades you bestow on these lines, David. I've not been perusing contests, but this one is interesting.