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On Our Friendship For Jan Allison

You were eyes for the man I was - blind  And always without strain you were kind  Love from the heart with no edit of mind  What a day it was I met you - what a find  In awe of your aura - to mesh I was inclined Our souls with ease from day one intertwined  Faith insisted on our meeting, solid, underlined   There were no keys on backs one had to wind  To say that I am thankful would be misdefined  A new word I would create for us for all mankind   For our story must be familiar one predefined   From up above written in stone and preassigned  I am writing this in monorhyme perfectly designed  Like our friendship it is one, neat and consigned   For you now - delivered, dated and proudly signed  01~11~2015  With Love Armand  Sponsor: Judy Konos Contest: Write A Poem

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Date: 2/21/2016 4:39:00 PM
This is so lovely!! All of you are such inspirational people and poets.. PoetrySoup is such an amazing place!! :D :D
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:29:00 PM
Maurice, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:46:00 PM
Whoa, this rocks Maurice.. An amazing winning tribute to Jan!!
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Date: 2/12/2015 11:35:00 PM
So glad to see this one again, Armand. YOU and Jan both are such wonderful people here at Soup. I am proud to know both of you. Congrats for this well deserved win
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Date: 2/11/2015 6:38:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to me *** blushes***- what can i say but thank you again my wonderful friend many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2015 10:02:00 AM
What a gift this poem is to your friend! A lovely tribute, Armand!!
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Date: 1/12/2015 4:38:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to a wonderful person ..Absolutely lovely.The world is indeed small compared to the heart of friendship..Charma.
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Date: 1/12/2015 2:18:00 AM
Great tribute to a common friend, Armand. This monorhyme constitutes a chain of very lovely thoughts. Well done! #7 and a fav. // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/12/2015 4:37:00 PM
This comment still makes me laugh out loud Paul:-) Hugs jan
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/23/2015 4:15:00 PM
ok.....shall we say...mutual!!!!!:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/23/2015 2:29:00 PM
Who are you calling common Paul lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 1/11/2015 11:53:00 PM
Maurice, I applaud you for this amazing tribute to sweet Jan. Both of you are truly incredible!
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Date: 1/11/2015 11:34:00 PM
Armand, my advice to you, is to hire a few security guards! Why? Because you have a heart of Gold !This poem I have no words, its beautiful.
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:54:00 PM
Isn't this absolutely sweet. Jan is a special lady with a heart of gold. You are a sweetie pie too...so...great write. Hugs
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:16:00 PM
Fabulous Friend...Fabulous Poet...C--->A
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:24:00 PM
AWESOME friendship poem, Armand. Jan has become such a good friend to both of us. She is a one of a kind!!! How great that you chose monorhyme and compared your friendship to the neatness of that design!! FAVE
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Date: 1/11/2015 2:57:00 PM
Well done -- Jan is a gem, a friendship worthy of much love. 7
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Date: 1/11/2015 12:27:00 PM
Simply sublime, Maurice. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 1/11/2015 11:34:00 AM
Excellent tribute
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful and most touching indeed. I know Jan like this very much. I noted here comment below!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:43:00 AM
Wow Armand I am truly speechless my friend - words fail me I can only say a sincere thank you:-) Love you Hugs Jan xx 7 faves:-)
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