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On My Walk

The basin in the water fountain Was completely full With water and with pigeons, Drawn there by a hot day’s pull. I watched the birds all splashing, Beaks and feathers soaking wet, As they cooled themselves from mugginess, Which isn’t over yet. Nearby, a man played trumpet; He was learning, that was clear, Though the pigeons didn’t let His muted bellows interfere.

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Date: 9/3/2021 11:41:00 AM
Your end rhymes are so terrific, I like running over here to see what you have done next.
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Date: 8/17/2021 3:15:00 PM
what awesome imagery Ilene, sounds like a lovely scene:-) hugs Jan xx
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