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On My Own In the Peak District

The blue sky, vast deep blue sky the crisp cold green grass beneath and between the two - just me! no moment of loneliness but of bliss, of existence, and thought of self and just be! no trees to block the clear view, sheep graze quiet, faraway, fragrant blossoms down the lea! how false are the chains of life? keep us captive, trapped, glued in? one breath- I cut myself free! 7 syllables rhyme with the last lines in each stanza Ah! to be in England now, that it is April there!

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Date: 5/13/2023 2:55:00 PM
Hello Krish, I thought I drop by and comment on your poem. Being a doctor you must be very busy. I guess you work evening hours. By the sway I will make this poem my fav. blessings my friend. Enjoy yoour evening. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/16/2023 10:30:00 AM
Hello Krish, thqank you for telling the type of doctor you are. Wow! You really have been in England a vey long time. Yes I enjoy her books. Best wishes to you. Enjoy your day my friend. Your friend /Darlene/
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/16/2023 7:05:00 AM
Hi Darlene I have been in England for 40years. That is more than half of my life! I am an Anaesthesiologist! Pleased you like DdM as well!! BW Krish
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2023 10:24:00 AM
Hello Krish, You are welcome. Yes as doctor you would work hard. What type of a doctor are you? It is Spring in Canada. Where I live. Krish I use to read Daphne Du Maurier's books. She is a great author. Have you lived in England all your Life? Your Friend, Darlene/
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/13/2023 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Darlene!! I work hard but I enjoy England’s beauty! It is Spring now and I am in Cornwall near Daphne Du Maurier's house to see where she lived and wrote her novels including Jamaica Inn!
Date: 4/3/2023 2:43:00 PM
England is very very beautiful in Spring and Summer. In Canada, we are still not in real Spring - Tulips are not in bloom yet. Love the way you have used rhyme in this poem - quite creative! Being a busy doctor, how do you manage to write mesmerizing poetry! Kudos to you.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/4/2023 11:00:00 PM
Dear Mala Thank you! I write what my heart tells me! I would like to share my minds reflections as i journey through life!

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