On My Mind

I cannot sleep for thoughts of you

You invade my senses - breathless

You sweep through me - unseen, yet there

Gentle upon my soul - are you

Where were you last night?

My soul aches in the ashes of memory

Every breath I breathe is yours

Take it - and let me rest 

My love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 7:30 AM
I have to ditto on the wonderful compliments left by our poets below. This is simply exquisite!
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 4:34 AM
- Lyn, this is beautiful !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:00 PM
I'm so glad you like it Anne! Can't wait to read yours . . . Lyn
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