On My Every Wall

My spirit resides in a small family’s home. I serve to divide up the rooms of that place. I haven’t got legs; therefore, I can’t roam. I guess what they see of me there is my face. . . a surface, which smooth, is painted beige-white. No ears do I have, and yet I hear all. No eyes, yet I see everything day and night. No lungs, yet I breathe; I am every wall. When holidays come, I inhale such delight: the sweet scent of cinnamon and fresh baked bread. I love it when sun through the drapes casts its light, and also I’m warmed hearing everything said . . . and sounds of the children laughing with glee, the soft sounds of love making from their folks’ room and their music, when played, which permeates me, dispelling those lonely times I feel such gloom. . . . for there was a time the kids colored on me. Their mother got angry, but all I recall is how small hands scribbled on me eagerly. Now I long for their touch on my every wall!
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Brul Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Magical! Congratulations!
Parker Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 4:12 PM
loved this, the part about holidays hit a nerve for me, every Christmas my wife takes everything off the walls and replaces them with a Christmas theme, I mean everything, pictures, candles, trinkets, bowls, statues,plants, everything, my house looks like a christmas shop...but I got to say it does look good...congrats on your win
A   Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations!!! Stopping by to enjoy last night's winning poems --once again. Thank you for supporting my tiny contest... :) LINDA
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:34 PM
Love this Andrea! What is a house without walls? How many stories walls have to recount (imagine those old, old mansions and castles!) If you were like me, you would still have many tell-tale remains left on purpose on the walls...feels such a loss scrubbing them away!! // congrats on win. // paul
Nance Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 10:23 AM
great poem, wtg :)
Allison Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 10:05 AM
congrats on your winning poem Andrea. hugs Jan x
A. Sharma Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Subtly beautiful Andrea ! Great wit is what makes u win ,, Oh a message in last few lines,, yes once they grow up n are far off we crave for their scribbling touch,,, congrats on big win !
Williams Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Andrea big contras on your win, this is a wonderful write....David
Falotico Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Ahhh if these walls could talk lol. Which brings me to your comment on "Where's the Blame". It is an ex girlfriend and yes a special one. That's all I'm saying Hun lol. Hugs Michael
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 1:29 PM
I figured that!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Andrea, I love how you gave a voice to the walls of a happy home! And the last line is wonderful. Congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda
M V Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 11:06 AM
This is a nicely penned poem,Andrea.Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Richards Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 8:50 AM
You've made your "walls and home" sound like a happy place to be........crayon scribbles and all! What a fun and warm place to enjoy your family, Andrea. loved this! (ps.....yes, I've been taking a respite from the Soup....but thanks for asking. It was time for a little break.....but I'll check in now and then). You are one of the few who noticed.....so I appreciate your concern! :) Thank you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:27 AM
I loved this one Andie. 'for there was a time the kids colored on me.'favorite line....Congratulations on your win!
Babcock Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Congrats on this lovely poem. Yes, if only wall could talk what stories they would tell ha ha. love phyl
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 5:57 AM
Aw, Andrea, that reminds me of my Gramma's old home and her old flora wallpaper. Brings back memories. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Macfarlane Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Beautiful and sweet write Andrea! Congrats on your win! Hugs
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 9:27 AM
The story of happy walls. congratulations Andrea. Lvoe, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 8:00 AM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND EXCELLENT WIN LUV .. ALWAYS A RARE TREAT TO READ YOUR WORK ..
Liwayway Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Oh, I like it Andrea, congratulations on your win..so creative...Cheers!!!!!!!have a blessed day always!! (^_^) hugs! **Maria**
Gasun Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:51 PM
MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY FRIEND!!! :) HUGS Leonora
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Naughty kids coloring on the walls oh my I would have gotten a spanking! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Congrats Andrea...a lovely piece for a super win. Blessings. Joy Wells
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 12:12 PM
all in the name of a home full of joy, andie... congrats with huggs!..:)
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