On Memory Burns, On Memory Burns


Memory burns the kettle black.  It bursts.
Broth slides as cream sticks to the stove's hot eye.
Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred.

Dinner is runned out on in a quick blur.
Yesterday's coating is on my tongue's cry.
Memory burns the kettle black.  It bursts.

The room's chills left there hold me within brrs.
How could melted icecubes still subtly bite?
Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred.

I flow like a desert's sandpaper thirst.
The watered taste is hardened by stark light.
Memory burns the kettle black.  It bursts.

A wait in this loveache becomes curdled.
Please, hold me, all my scars don't feed it right.
Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred.

Where a cleaning chore, inside only shirk.
The warmth in my bubble is a goodbye.
Memory burns the kettle black.  It bursts.
Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred.
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May 8, 2026 at 5:08 AM
The analogy of a neglected kettle turning black is a great one for describing how the past may "scorch" the present.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 4:03 PM
Your poem stars in metaphoric excellence, Paige, truly spectacular!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 8:42 AM
So much to love here! … Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred... How could melted icecubes still subtly bi…how well you express your emotions. I hope you find your own metaphors cathartic. Hugs
Gifford Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Hello Paige, this is an emotional and touching write. So many unique lines. Loved this one: Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred. So powerful . Wishing you a wonderful day my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 2:22 AM
Great metaphor that illustrates how past experiences can "scorch" the present, like a neglected kettle that burns black.
Empress Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 2:15 AM
I felt this poem flowing with such brilliant and unique metaphors dear sweet Paige! You have a way with words which makes me somehow feel lines like "How could melted icecubes still subtly bite? Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred" gosh! I was feeling that so deeply and then i read it here today! I must fave this poem, i hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
George Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 10:31 PM
This is one of your best dear Paige. A poem of lofty diction and deep emotions. Your refrain- "Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred" is quite powerful.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 4:51 PM
well constructed and meaningful villanella. I especially like the last two ending lines. Hope you are well, hugs, Sara
Poet Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 9:28 AM
Your Villanelle is so well-structured and has a clear thematic progression through imagery and repetition. The final line, "Emptiness gathers on a spoon, unstirred," creates a strong, almost haunting rhythm that ties the poem together. The quality is high, as the poem evokes a strong sense of loss and longing.
Daniels Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 10:41 PM
Exquisitely Poet-ent Poet-yess ! Just the right form for what you want to express, in express excessive excell ! : memory circling in Black and White. Villanelle is not only good for lyric but also for working with the subconscious, because of its repetitive lines. Kettle & cooking is an excellent metaphor to use for subject matter as is spoon, because of its easy to see empty-full quality. Cream sticking & melted ice-cubes are stark powerful juxtapositions for introspective poems. How you’ve flipped flow re thirst is masterful, Paige. I love “all my scars don’t feed right” - it clearly depicts the unfinished nature of healing. Bursting & emptiness one below each other illustrates circle that emotions move in. Know that outside of the confines of this site, this is a Gold. Xx
Anaya Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 10:23 PM
Whoa the images captured loneliness, merging scars, thirst, and a long journey just beginning it seems. This is a difficult form--well-done, poet! Faving & saving :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 7:30 PM
Wow. Have you done many villanelles?. I think being limited to this form makes your writing so stunning. A fave back at ya.
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