On Meeting Most Beautiful

On meeting most beautiful 
adoring maiden kisses in thoughts
Deeply inhaling one warm 
breath a sip off the finest old grog
auld mountain dew breathing pure
Golden leaves sweetly float dancing twirl
Shining inside vision sweet
walking hand in hand on golden sands
waves unfold a carpet blue 
to white ebbing thoughts pure crashing love
Against the deepest walls warm
soft light silent echoes whisper true 
sweetly melting emotions 
Brewing kisses clouds peach fading out
to shades of grey tuning kiss
Silver treasuring thoughts I love you
peachy beautiful dream gem
dancing petal flowers one red rose
I have visions of you dancing in my
dreams as I sleep most wonderfully
on soft clouds in the azure sky
At times I gaze skyward on days
bright and beautiful seeing your
face in the sky and feeling always
your most wonderful presence
like texture and scent of most 
sensual red rose petals gently
landing on the sweet dew ground
On meeting you most beautiful
maiden my thoughts always turn
most instantly to love and happiness
with my emotions and my soul on
fire in storms of unbridled passion and
pleasure I can only say I love you
forever and forever 

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Free Verse Poem
November 13, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Cayanan Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 11:49 PM
this is so lovely and romantic piece Gary and Liam! have a wonderful day to both of you...
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Thanks Katrina, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 4:05 AM
katrina you also have a wonderful day heartfelt beautiful comment bless you
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 8:54 PM
A beautiful collab from the two of you! I would have never known...hugs, Rhonda
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:54 PM
Thanks Rhonda!! Gary (Sorry I got my responses mixed up a bit here.)
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Thanks Katrina, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:49 AM
rhonda thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment bless you
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:00 PM
rate 7 from me to you! :-) sorry I forgot it before Liam
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 1:52 PM
My dear friend Liam, this is a most beautiful love poem filled of so much love and romance . you and Gary are a great writing team! Keep your golden pen flowing through forever. :-) love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:19 PM
thank you kindly dorian dear friend truly beautiful comment gary really done a marvelous job on this bless you
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Well done both of you!! Honestly I did not realize two pens were involved in writing this peach of a poem....not till I came right to the bottom! Beautiful and captivating imagery. This must be love!! (a top rating, of course!) // paul
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Thanks Paul!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:15 PM
wonderful comment paul thank you ever so kindly dear friend truly heartfelt with gary's pen it really blossomed out bless you pal
Carroll Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Usual good stuff Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:10 PM
thank you ken dear pal always great to see you
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 7:08 AM
superb write.. ! wowowooww! you two are amazing!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 11:22 AM
thank you so much olive heartfelt beautiful comment bless you
Meade Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 5:57 AM
This is a fine single malt scot whiskey -- smoky, smooth, and intoxicating. Outstanding -- just the thing for a cold day to warm me up.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 6:35 AM
it sure is to heat the cockles of the heart david wonderful comment deeply appreciated pal
Bailey Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Great job guys (Liam and Gary). I absolutely love this piece. Great team work and a remarkable end result. A well deserved 7 from me. Warm regards "B"
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Thanks "B." Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 6:26 AM
thank you deeply dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Cruz Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:47 AM
wonderful poem Liam. a 7 from me
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:51 AM
jasmine thank you so kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated gary he spiced this really up with his pen
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