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On Maydays Day

I turn to my girl highlighting Mayday is near A day of spectacle that the whole village views There's Jesters of folly and Knights without fear Witnessing lances and jokes, always going askew To view such we can venture along different ways We can stroll by the river listening to many sounds In awe as we walk amidst most wondrous displays That on any given day beautiful vistas abound Decisions, decisions, as we contemplate which way It's such a special day wondering what to wear Beauty personified will my Olive be on this day Knights or Royal Princes, all they can do is stare So tomorrow we've decided to be our chosen route Two hearts in decision, declaring what's their suit <*> Mayday morn now greets as I turn next to me She my guiding light as beautiful as the dawn Excitement illuminates for into her eyes I see Onto my back I lie, that feel she's now upon Into this day we go heading along the river Crystal clear translucent such serenity in it's flow Under greened canopies cooled shaded deliver Wafting leaved dress in delightful fanned throw We sense the clearings near for scents we sense Sporadic clusters in capture of welcoming eyes Mayday games have started, distant heard suspense Knights on horseback mounted, now in espy Now we're in amidst encapsulated we now are She's here to cheer, her Sir James, soon to spar <*> Balcony she now awaits, white steed he's now astride Blinkered pairings gallop towards intended foe To win this Mayday he, to fight for her his bride Eliminate his enemy, witness his crimson flow His lance in now connect, thrown metal disperses Petals of beauty hurled of rainbows selected Images of we, now thinking marital rehearses To know on this day, her intended she's elected Moments of their previous now in recent past Knowing they're now free in kaleidoscopic stream Spectrum of feelings now in view full cast In colourful extremes, fight for your dreams .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/11/2015 5:35:00 AM
HUge James, my late congratulations to your TOP spot win.. :)! I knew from the very start that this will go high on the rankings... :)! (((hugs))~olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 2:32:00 PM
LIttle Oliz, thank you kindly for I really enjoyed writing this Mayday poem with you in mind as the Maiden whose hand I had to win. Warm huggles always // HUge James xxxx
Date: 5/9/2015 8:39:00 PM
James.. I certainly see why your write was honored with the top placement. Congrats on your exceptional winner!
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James Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Dave for your always kind comments, much appreciated, James :)
Date: 5/8/2015 2:35:00 PM
James, CONGRATS in Isaiah Zerbst's contest *SKAT*
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James Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 2:12:00 PM
Many thanks SKAT, James :) :)
Date: 5/8/2015 2:29:00 PM
Am delighted to see this get top spot Sir James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Jan, it was a joy to write, and so delighted it was received as it was, hugs // James xx
Date: 5/8/2015 2:25:00 PM
Hello James, back here again. Congratulations on your first day of may win. Love LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 2:07:00 PM
Many thanks again Linda, always appreciated, James :)
Date: 4/12/2015 12:27:00 AM
James, you have a beautiful way of presenting Mondays.... LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thank you kindly PD. I so enjoyed writing this poem, smiling all the way, James :)
Date: 4/11/2015 5:46:00 PM
Poetry partner, my friend, for someone special, this a wow poem!!! lovely how each line progress and the scene goes on... the imagery and that way you drew is endearing... and I can see through the lines ......... warm and tight hugs!!!..:)//olive eloisa xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 4/12/2015 2:36:00 PM
As soon as I read about the contest I knew what I wanted to write about. Glad you liked it Oliz, warm and tight hugs back, soon ;-) Dino James xxxx
Date: 4/11/2015 3:33:00 PM
what a delightful love story James - such wonderful imagery made me think of a Kevin Costner film - maybe robin prince of thieves - love the line 'She my guiding light as beautiful as the dawn' simply charming - am making this a fave so I can revisit its wonder imagery and 7 :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:49:00 PM
Poem aside ''She my guiding light as beautiful as the dawn' she sure is // hugs, James xxxx