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On May Sixteenth

I waited as I always do for at this time what would ensue! It happens in the month of May. Like clockwork, it again came true. It was a quite nice, sunny day as I drove up on my driveway, beside which stands a lovely tree nearby where starlings like to play. I saw those starlings soaring free, and as they swooped, enchanting me, to my front porch my eyes were drawn. Can you guess then what I did see? Five rose bushes my eyes fell on - the only bushes by my lawn. Though all through winter they’d been dead, they’ve greened up with cold weather gone. Spring’s here for sure. Yes, winter’s fled, and never have I been misled by Mother Earth. I’m welcomed each mid-May by that first rose of red. Written a few days after May 16, 2022 Posted May 25, 2022 For Sotto Poet's Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/14/2022 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" rose write. Today, be blessed with your win..............
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Date: 6/13/2022 11:59:00 PM
I am back to give you Congratulations on your first place win Andrea. This form is a beauty. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2022 7:21:00 PM
A great poem with realities, convictions, hopes and all the symbols and images accompanying these. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2022 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! Yes, how the roses are flourishing….Mother Earth never lets us down. :)Paulette
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Date: 6/13/2022 4:06:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding submission in my contest, Andrea. Blessings
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Date: 5/28/2022 10:12:00 PM
My roses are blooming too Andrea. I have not fed them, barely watered them since I have been under the weather, yet they still bloom. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/28/2022 7:24:00 AM
There's nothing more enchanting than that sight of a blooming red rose, Andrea, love this rubaiyat:)
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Date: 5/25/2022 11:08:00 AM
The rose rose lifting your spirit ...Aloha!
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Date: 5/25/2022 8:12:00 AM
Great entry, Andrea. The roses tell the story. Great suspense and imagery. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 5/25/2022 7:07:00 AM
nearby where starlings like to play - the starlings indeed enchanted me in your delightful poem, Andrea!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2022 12:33:00 PM
they have come to nest again right over the part of our garage where the door closes down. I love seeing them.
Date: 5/25/2022 7:05:00 AM
A lovely poem Andrea. Debx
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