On May Sixteenth

I waited as I always do
for at this time what would ensue!
It happens in the month of May.
Like clockwork, it again came true.

It was a quite nice, sunny day
as I drove up on my driveway,
beside which stands a lovely tree 
nearby where starlings like to play.

I saw those starlings soaring free,
and as they swooped, enchanting me,
to my front porch my eyes were drawn.
Can you guess then what I did see?

Five rose bushes my eyes fell on -
the only bushes by my lawn.
Though all through winter they’d been dead,
they’ve greened up with cold weather gone.

Spring’s here for sure. Yes, winter’s fled,
and never have I been misled
by Mother Earth. I’m welcomed each
mid-May by that first rose of red.

Written a few days after May 16, 2022
Posted May 25, 2022 For Sotto Poet's Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/15/2024 7:20:00 PM
Love this- <3
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Date: 6/14/2022 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" rose write. Today, be blessed with your win..............
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Date: 6/13/2022 11:59:00 PM
I am back to give you Congratulations on your first place win Andrea. This form is a beauty. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2022 7:21:00 PM
A great poem with realities, convictions, hopes and all the symbols and images accompanying these. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2022 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! Yes, how the roses are flourishing….Mother Earth never lets us down. :)Paulette
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Date: 6/13/2022 4:06:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding submission in my contest, Andrea. Blessings
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Date: 5/28/2022 10:12:00 PM
My roses are blooming too Andrea. I have not fed them, barely watered them since I have been under the weather, yet they still bloom. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/28/2022 7:24:00 AM
There's nothing more enchanting than that sight of a blooming red rose, Andrea, love this rubaiyat:)
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Date: 5/25/2022 11:08:00 AM
The rose rose lifting your spirit ...Aloha!
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Date: 5/25/2022 8:12:00 AM
Great entry, Andrea. The roses tell the story. Great suspense and imagery. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 5/25/2022 7:07:00 AM
nearby where starlings like to play - the starlings indeed enchanted me in your delightful poem, Andrea!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2022 12:33:00 PM
they have come to nest again right over the part of our garage where the door closes down. I love seeing them.
Date: 5/25/2022 7:05:00 AM
A lovely poem Andrea. Debx
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