Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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On Mauve Outskirts

Mauve sun is rising
far across the frothy sea
From mists emerging
at the edge of the blue world
and the pause of dusky night

Destination noon
and blithe before and after
Headed everywhere
In the quiet room of time
when stars are disappearing

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Sara Kendrick September 30, 2022 at 1:47 PM I like the lines "in the quiet room of time, when stars are disappearing". That is an awesome time of day. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Evelyn Judy Buehler September 30, 2022 at 4:15 PM I'm very pleased discover you enjoyed this poem, Sara. Thank you so much for letting me know. :)

Sotto Poet September 26, 2022 at 2:56 PM A fascinating account of the morning sunlight, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler September 26, 2022 at 3:21 PM Thank you very much, Lasaad. :)

Deb M September 26, 2022 at 5:48 AM Lovely Evelyn…..Debx Evelyn Judy Buehler September 26, 2022 at 10:48 AM Thank you, Deb. :)

Victor Buhagiar September 26, 2022 at 12:01 AM Interesting description of sunrise. Evelyn Judy Buehler September 26, 2022 at 10:50 AM There's no two exactly alike. Thank you.