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On Maui

Sitting on the breakwater, long before first light, I was met by gifts and messengers. First, a small bird to warn me to be ready. And then, knowing before it happened, that a shooting star would appear, right where I looked, followed by the ecstasy between land and water the sky and I, and from somewhere, a mantra, "Don't be greedy, don't be greedy." All will come about in due time. Be happy with small gifts from the universe

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Date: 4/20/2010 7:13:00 AM
TY for reminding me of Maui. I lived in Lahaina for two years. Nice poetry and congrats for being featured. I am now in Ambelokipi.
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 3:39:00 PM
Good msssage. Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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