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On Lemmings, Chickens, and Things Across the Tundra, lemmings race To the cliff, then over the face. The prevailing theory laments That this is not mass hysteria But miscalculated judgment In migratory behaviour. And I watch my neighbours hoarding Lest they should find themselves wanting; Epitomes of ascendancy Clipped to animistic qualities. Flailing arms scurry to the abyss Repeating, ‘The sky is falling!’ And I, a social misfit, surmise, Deluded prank on the populace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/17/2020 2:10:00 PM
Hello Denis Spilchuk, Ym! Te sky never falls. Have a nice day my friend. Be well. Have a nice day my friend.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 3/18/2020 4:35:00 PM
Let's hope this isn't acceptable & ensure it doesn't become the norm.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2020 5:43:00 PM
Hello Denis yes you are right about that. But the panic does happen and leads to unwelcomed consequences. have a nice evening my friend.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 3/17/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Darlene; I know the sky doesn't fall but unnecessary panic can lead to unwelcomed consequences.
Date: 3/16/2020 10:14:00 PM
Nice take on the madness. Your bemused perspective is a welcome respite from the gnawing nastiness! Thanks, Dennis. :) Gershon
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 3/17/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. Sometimes a little humor is required during troubling times like these.
Date: 3/16/2020 5:06:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem Dennis,
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 3/17/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thank you & I hope patience prevails & we all get through this ordeal, hopefully for the better.

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