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Written 17 December 2025

Placed Fourth in Holiday Humour Limerick Poetry Contest of Tania Kitchin

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On Holidays


                                                    A tourist named Joe from Dundee
                                                     Got lost by the bright sunny sea;
                                                    He bellowed, “Where is my map?”
                                                        Searching, he fell in a trap;
                                                He yelled: “These trips aren`t fun for me.”
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Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Tania's contest. Creative work. Sara K
Guptar Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 10:33 PM
Thank you for appreciating the above write, Hope that you have started the new year on a pleasant note.
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Love this. Back with Congratulations on the win
Guptar Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 10:37 PM
Thank you, dear poetess for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes, Hope that you have started the new year on a pleasant note.
Kitchin Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Krishnanand, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
Guptar Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 9:54 AM
Thank you poetess for appreciating the above fun Limerick and for its placemnt in the contest sponsored by you. Hope that you have started the new year on a pleasant trail. My new year wishes to Poetry Soup friends, staff and memebers can be viewed on PS website.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Cute one, Krish.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Hello Guptar, I do not think he fouund the trip being fun. Merry Christmas. I am sending you the light. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 4:17 AM
Hello Guptar, Merry Christmas to you. All the best for the New year. My friend. thank youf or the blessings and the light. /Darlene/
Guptar Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 10:48 PM
Thank you dear friend for visiting my page. Wish you a very pious, auspicious and merry Christmas. Sending you blwssings of light.
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