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the 'Paint a Picture' Poetry Contest Joseph May / 5 lines of 5 words

 

 

On Grandpa's Porch

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My grandfather’s old wooden chair
stills sits on the porch
facing the land he cherished.
Twilight time will soon come.
Grandpa’s time is already done.
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Beaufort Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 5:13 AM
Andrea, I was listening to a piece on NPR about air conditioning. We (collectively) used to sit on porches waiting for our homes to cool in the evening. After air conditioning became ubiquitous, people retreated inside and didn't talk to each other or interact as much. Kinda sad really. Now we have internet and phone friends and our neighbors seem more unknown to us. I spend more time outside than most. Those of us who do understand and see what has happened.
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Those were the days. I was playing around Grandpa's house though. Rarely sitting on his porch
Woods Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 8:39 AM
I love this. We'll deserved win! Xo
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Thanks
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 5:27 PM
what an excellent interpretation of the picture Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
George Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 3:23 PM
Back with congratulations on your wonderful win Dear Andrea. Cheers.
Drowley Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading "On Grandpa’s Porch." Have a great day writing away..................
May Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 5:19 AM
A cherished memory, Congrats on your win Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 8:25 AM
Heartwarming! Still in use, still in view though unoccupied, still twilight fills the rocker. Love it, Andrea!
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. It is amazing how many different ideas can come from one picture. Thanks for sharing and dropping by my page. Sara
George Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:40 PM
I thought the same thing about that chair. How it reeks of good memories and wishes now sitting empty. I love the imagery. Best wishes for the contest. Cheers, dear Andrea.
DiMino Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:00 PM
"Grandpa’s time is already done":) -- Good luck in contest. Love it.
Hind Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:54 AM
The tone of memory- loved it
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Paige
Narain Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:12 AM
A nostalgic poem with vivid imagery. I will love to sit on this chair anytime.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Jay
Buehler Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 10:12 PM
Your beautiful poem evokes vivid images, laced with nostalgia, Andrea. Well composed. Good luck in the contest. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Thank you
Onclaud Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:44 PM
soulful write which i can relate to, andie... i did one similar to this! we are on the same league!
One Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 2:10 PM
OMG... I wrote about my nanna and used the same image... great minds think alike.. Best of luck in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Thanks. I tale that as a great compliment
Empress Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 1:22 PM
Oh wow sweet andrea when i saw this picture that’s exactly what i first thought of my grandpas chair, and how it still sits there, so many memories, where my grandma lives alone now.. this is a fave for me! I just love the fact that it resonates with me. Best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Thanks so much, sweetie
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