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On Fetid Wing

Fear flutters on fetid wing when jealousy stirs inside. And camouflages its sting, but it's difficult to hide. Feeling like it's dying inside, a broken heart doesn't sing. For it's lost its strident stride, like a puppet with no string. Deceiving my heart, you lied, knowing what pain you would bring. And as my hopes and dreams died, you pawned my engagement ring. You simply cast trust aside and scraped up some muck to sling. And didn't care if I cried, hurling words hurt egos fling. You're heart's devious and snide, a lonely, desperate thing. And your fortunes will slip-slide, no matter how hard you cling. (Quatrain) 8/19/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Well penned, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 6:53 PM
A good message in this poem throughout---the ending is a lesson for revengeful hearts. Good work, Emile! well presented!!
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your continued support my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 7:06 PM
So true, how people can be like this, Emile. I love the real life things you write about with truth !
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.
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