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On Feathered Wings

On Feathered Wings

dispatched to heaven 
on feathered wings of angels…
a child’s fervent prayers
 




Inspired by SKAT A’s contest.

angelchildprayerhaiku

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Richard Lamoureux

May 16, 2018 at 9:32 AM

Beautiful!

Pandita Sietesantos

May 16, 2018 at 11:29 AM

Hi Richard, I really appreciate your sweet compliments. My friend, thank you so very much! I am inspired. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch

February 8, 2017 at 11:50 AM

Love this haiku. Definite 7.

Pandita Sietesantos

February 8, 2017 at 12:11 PM

You are just the best! Thank you for showing so much appreciation for my efforts! Pandita

Alesia Leach

September 10, 2015 at 5:11 PM

Such a sweet Haiku. Well Done!!

Pandita Sietesantos

September 11, 2015 at 9:04 PM

Dear Alesia, I am so appreciative of your kind complimentary words and sweet comments! Thank you! Have a wonderful, relaxing weekend. Pandita

Anindya Mohan Tagore

August 25, 2015 at 10:57 PM

Beautiful Haiku... Regards, Bobby

Pandita Sietesantos

August 26, 2015 at 7:09 AM

Hi Bobby, I appreciate your visit and thank you for the lovely compliments given to this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita

Darlene Gifford

August 7, 2015 at 2:17 AM

A child's prayers are precious and sweet and I'm sure God hears everyone. I loved your writing on this subject. A 7 and thanks for visiting my poem.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 7, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Thank you so kindly, Darlene, for your wonderful comments, compliments, and high rating! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Kp Nunez

July 30, 2015 at 10:47 AM

Wow...impressive, Pandita. Looks like a senryu...either way, this leaves a lovely image in my mind. I'm glad I got to read this today. hugs1

Pandita Sietesantos

July 30, 2015 at 12:32 PM

Dear Kim, many thanks for your lovely compliment which I appreciate! All the best. Pandita

Eric Boddie

July 29, 2015 at 9:46 AM

the innocence of a child....true Beauty without denial....always protected by God's Grace....because evil knows nothing about a child's Prayer, not even a single trace....nicely done....;)

Pandita Sietesantos

July 29, 2015 at 9:49 AM

Dear Eric, I really appreciate your high praises and compliments. My friend, thank you so very much! I am inspired. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

July 28, 2015 at 1:50 AM

I adore the endearing feeling of this lovely haiku Pandita! Beautiful! 7

Pandita Sietesantos

July 28, 2015 at 11:55 AM

Hi Connie, it is great to hear from you! Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments and high rating, my friend! Have a great day! Pandita

Eileen Manassian

July 27, 2015 at 1:39 PM

Wow!!! This is absolutely amazing, Pandita. Was this the poem you were referring to. Sorry it took me some time to get here...but it was worth reading this lovely piece. :) Hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

July 27, 2015 at 6:11 PM

My dear friend, thank you so very much for taking the time to visit and i am happy you enjoyed this piece. The one I referred to is called "Flying High" which I posted on July 5, 2015. Thanks again and all the best! Pandita

Robert Heemstra

July 26, 2015 at 8:20 PM

This haiku took me back to my childhood, when I was in Catholic school and believing in angels. I guess you don't feel any restrictions writing an haiku. Thanks for reminding me I need to be reading more of this fine poetry on this site.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 26, 2015 at 9:11 PM

Hi Robert, like you I also attended Catholic school, but I guess our art takes us beyond religion and haiku gives us added freedom to spread our wings! Thank you for stopping by and for your high praises for this piece which mean a lot to me! Enjoy a wonderful week ahead! Pandita

Skat A

July 20, 2015 at 3:40 PM

Pandita, a beautiful haiku... SKAT LOVE

Pandita Sietesantos

July 21, 2015 at 7:19 AM

It was totally inspired by your contest! Thank you so much for complimenting it! All the best to you, SKAT A! Pandita

Sara Kendrick

July 20, 2015 at 1:10 PM

Good one with a great depth of meaning..Reads like a winner to me.Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Pandita Sietesantos

July 21, 2015 at 7:18 AM

Hi Sara, thank you so very much for stopping by to compliment this piece. Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Alexis Y.

July 19, 2015 at 8:27 PM

Pandita, l loved this is a beautiful haiku. I ejoyed how you penned the way God sees children. They are so precious in his sight. The imajery was excellent as well.You get a 7 from me:)Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos

July 20, 2015 at 11:10 AM

Dear Alexis, thank you so much for the wonderful applause! Have a beautiful day! Pandita

Arthur Vaso

July 19, 2015 at 2:28 PM

Very lovely haiku Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 19, 2015 at 2:42 PM

Dear Arthur, many thanks for your lovely compliment which I appreciate! All the best. Pandita

Kika Ayala

July 19, 2015 at 1:46 PM

This is so lovely, I rate it a 7! Of course the little ones have a special place in the heart of God! Well done! Have a nice day! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

July 19, 2015 at 2:41 PM

Hi Kika, thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments and high rating, my friend! Have a great day! Pandita

Franklin Price

July 17, 2015 at 9:23 PM

lovely visual

Pandita Sietesantos

July 18, 2015 at 12:29 PM

Dear Franklin, many thanks for your lovely compliment which I appreciate! All the best. Pandita

Jan Allison

July 17, 2015 at 1:27 PM

simply charming - what wonderful imagery Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Pandita Sietesantos

July 18, 2015 at 12:25 PM

Hi Jan, thank you so very much for stopping by to compliment this piece. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you and your family are doing well! Pandita

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