Get Your Premium Membership

On Dismal Days

On dismal days, don't dress for gloom; Inject some joy into the room. Reject a shirt of somber hue In favor of a brilliant blue Or neon green or red or pink To lift the spirits in a blink, For it's a shame to cede the day And, too, your mood, to shades of gray. You might not think a simple top In colors meant to dance and pop Would have the power to reverse The grayness hanging like a curse But my advice is, don't deny it 'Til, at least, you say you'll try it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/1/2020 7:50:00 PM
I'm with you, Ilene! My spirits are tangibly lifted when I see others wearing cheerful colors. Good advice in a lovely, upbeat rhyme ~ John
Login to Reply
Date: 10/4/2019 8:20:00 AM
- An enchanting poem ... that can change a gray day, Ilene :) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/3/2019 8:24:00 PM
Great advice, Ilene! Amazing the difference a splash of color can make in one's mood. Nicely done! :) gw
Login to Reply
Date: 10/3/2019 7:51:00 PM
Nicely done, but a shot of Fernet-Branca works for me! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Date: 10/3/2019 11:01:00 AM
Neon green or pink probably wouldn't work out too well for me but red or blue is good. : ) This was nice Ilene. Cute, positive and so true.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs