On Dismal Days

On dismal days, don't dress for gloom;
Inject some joy into the room.
Reject a shirt of somber hue
In favor of a brilliant blue

Or neon green or red or pink
To lift the spirits in a blink,
For it's a shame to cede the day
And, too, your mood, to shades of gray.

You might not think a simple top
In colors meant to dance and pop
Would have the power to reverse
The grayness hanging like a curse 

But my advice is, don't deny it
'Til, at least, you say you'll try it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 7:50 PM
I'm with you, Ilene! My spirits are tangibly lifted when I see others wearing cheerful colors. Good advice in a lovely, upbeat rhyme ~ John
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:20 AM
- An enchanting poem ... that can change a gray day, Ilene :) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Great advice, Ilene! Amazing the difference a splash of color can make in one's mood. Nicely done! :) gw
Leffanta Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Nicely done, but a shot of Fernet-Branca works for me! Aloha! Rico
Green Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 11:01 AM
Neon green or pink probably wouldn't work out too well for me but red or blue is good. : ) This was nice Ilene. Cute, positive and so true.
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