On Dad

As the sawdust rises
The morning mist embraces
A  lonesome cruiser in his white car
Which resembles a dove...
Cruising the seas!

He drives on with his beautiful  children
Whom he loves with all his heart..
With a loving smile and a handshake,
He greets everyone he meets on the way
...And so he cruises on all his life!

Sadly and silently now, he has travelled
Into the heaven above.
Where he lives on in all the heavenly glory!

And do you know...?
Even GOD knows that-This was a Man-so true to his words!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Loving tribute to a person that you loved and respected. Keep writing. Sara
Shahwan Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 5:34 AM
Passionate poetry. Poised. All the best.
Brown Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your heartfelt poetry today Seema. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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