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On Cloud Nine

The spent sun sets, takes away my day I paint new sun on canvas within The silver moon in satin night sky Reflects in inner mirror my dreams Configured in essence euphoric For your charming closeness completes me. I walk the penultimate ninth mile My soul spreads wings for the final flight Soars to eternal bliss on cloud nine. May 13, 2021 Syllable count : 9 per line (howmanysyllables.com) Contest : A Time For Nine Sponsor : Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 5/21/2021 6:48:00 AM
Absolutely delighted subimal, many congratulations on your win , hugs Jan x
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:16:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting, especially the last three lines. God bless you.
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Date: 5/20/2021 9:24:00 PM
Awesome poem Subimal....Congrats on your win....Take care dear friend :)
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:01:00 AM
Wow, this paints a picture, your word choices are so skillful, I really like 'your charming closeness completes me' - congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 5/13/2021 4:34:00 AM
Wonderful verse - Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:04:00 AM
Your imagery is fantastic.
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