Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Free verse

On Cloud Nine

The spent sun sets, takes away my day
I paint new sun on canvas within
The silver moon in satin night sky
Reflects in inner mirror my dreams
Configured in essence euphoric
For your charming closeness completes me.

I walk the penultimate ninth mile
My soul spreads wings for the final flight
Soars to eternal bliss on cloud nine.

May 13, 2021
Syllable count : 9 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest : A Time For Nine
Sponsor : Michelle Faulkner

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Jan Allison May 21, 2021 at 6:48 AM Absolutely delighted subimal, many congratulations on your win , hugs Jan x

Beata Agustin May 20, 2021 at 11:16 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting, especially the last three lines. God bless you.

Carol Mitra May 20, 2021 at 9:24 PM Awesome poem Subimal....Congrats on your win....Take care dear friend :)

Christuraj Alex May 20, 2021 at 11:08 AM Congratulations!

Michelle Faulkner May 20, 2021 at 11:01 AM Wow, this paints a picture, your word choices are so skillful, I really like 'your charming closeness completes me' - congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!

Regina Mcintosh May 13, 2021 at 4:34 AM Wonderful verse - Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Caren Krutsinger May 13, 2021 at 3:04 AM Your imagery is fantastic.