On Christmas Morning

My gift meowed and made a leap; and stayed in the Christmas tree all day. ____________________________ November 10, 2015 Poetry/Crystalline/on Christmas morning Copyright Protected, ID 15-725-564-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
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Roper Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Love it!!! a big 7 Hugs dear friend
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Eve, thanks for the visit, the love, the hug and the 7 !
D. Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:34 AM
so cute!!!!!!!
La France Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Hi Nathan, yes she sure was a sweety, miss her so much ~
Beaufort Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Life is a mix of happy and sad. All the joy, and yet then the sadness must come. You have me in tears. I am just so glad that you are here. Thank you, thank-you. I know I am not alone in the kind of suffering that I have to endure. You have made a grown man cry. I completely understand.
La France Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Duke, you always have a friend in me, we are joined in our sadness, thank you so much for your beautiful comments and for understanding my pain
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Oh I remember She was sick..Now I'm seeing your comments reply.Oh dear,She passed away.That is sad Constance..I can understand how you feel.My dog has been dead for four yrs and I still miss her so much. Your poem.describes so well this sad emotion.Made us feel a lot in too little.
La France Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Charmaine, our pets become like our children and the pain of losing them is devastating, but I have 19 years of wonderful memories with Patches, thanks so much for visiting ~
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 7:54 PM
I love this. yes, do a short one. Good idea for this contest. You think like I do.
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Andrea, oh yes, short and sweet, and you know why, thanks for the visit, sweet Andrea ~
Martin Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 6:44 PM
Back to sympathize for your loss. . .
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Yes, Thomas it was a terrible loss, I was shattered
Martin Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Clearly all you now and then! Enjoyed so much!!
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Thanks for the visit Thomas
Inman Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Sooooo cute!
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Not my usual dark and sad writing. Thanks for visiting
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:20 PM
What a beautiful gift!:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Alexis, she stayed with me for 19 years she passed away this past February. Thanks for visiting
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Absolutely delightful! Hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:30 PM
Thanks so much Jan
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