On Children Today

What’s happening in this world?
I recall a sweeter time
when small girls with jump ropes twirled.
On jungle gyms, little boys would climb.

Now kids are at home alone.
Though some still might go outside,
many just sit with their phone.
They need to roam free, wild and wide-eyed.

They need to breathe outdoors air
and take a bike for a spin
to feel the wind in their hair.
With video games now they stay in.

Parents today who are wise
inspire their kids to create 
and their fancy to prize
in play! This should be all children’s fate.

March 24, 2022 
for Chantelle Anne Cooke's Lind30 Rhyme Poetry Contest
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Peck Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 4:42 PM
It's sad, all the joys we're losing. Using our imagination was so much fun. Congratulations :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations, Andrea! Oh to be carefree!
Alex Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 9:46 PM
The change in life-style, especially, of children, is beautifully portrayed. Congratulations!
Gibson Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 2:04 AM
So true, Andrea; children are being crippled for life. They don't know how to communicate with real people. It is sad.
Maverick Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 5:54 AM
Hmm...It seems to me other countries Children Are living as if they were in Britian, or Ireland where there Is a great deal of damp in the air in quite a Few months on end..) yet still even then its Good for them and all to take opportunity to get Out saying this the past 4 days have been good Today bring the better one, good post here Andrea.'
Loving Iii Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:32 PM
More of a statement sad but true. we can't go back but must look for the next electronic changes that will take over.
Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:21 PM
Excellent Lind30, Andrea. I agree with your poem, kids need to learn how to play outside and just have fun more.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Wise words indeed Andrea, the kids need to get out and about as we did when we were growing up:-) hugs Jan xx
Brewer Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 2:31 PM
We must pray that sooner or later they will discover the greater riches of the ‘real’ world. Now in my day……..No! Stop me!
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 12:02 PM
i agree 100%, andrea! i think it's sad that kids don't have the freedom (or desire) to go outside and play in their neighborhoods...
Leffanta Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Commons sense should tell parents their children need to be outdoors for eyesight to develop normally, otherwise they are subject to a lifetime of myopia and other health problems. . . . .Enjoyed, Andrea! Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:20 PM
thanks. And Not many parents with common sense these days.
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Well said Andrea, kids today would rather hibernate in their rooms, they should be out getting fresh air and seeing real life. Tom
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