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What’s happening in this world? I recall a sweeter time when small girls with jump ropes twirled. On jungle gyms, little boys would climb. Now kids are at home alone. Though some still might go outside, many just sit with their phone. They need to roam free, wild and wide-eyed. They need to breathe outdoors air and take a bike for a spin to feel the wind in their hair. With video games now they stay in. Parents today who are wise inspire their kids to create and their fancy to prize in play! This should be all children’s fate. March 24, 2022 for Chantelle Anne Cooke's Lind30 Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/18/2022 4:42:00 PM
It's sad, all the joys we're losing. Using our imagination was so much fun. Congratulations :)
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Date: 4/14/2022 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea! Oh to be carefree!
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Date: 4/13/2022 9:46:00 PM
The change in life-style, especially, of children, is beautifully portrayed. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:04:00 AM
So true, Andrea; children are being crippled for life. They don't know how to communicate with real people. It is sad.
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Date: 3/26/2022 5:54:00 AM
Hmm...It seems to me other countries Children Are living as if they were in Britian, or Ireland where there Is a great deal of damp in the air in quite a Few months on end..) yet still even then its Good for them and all to take opportunity to get Out saying this the past 4 days have been good Today bring the better one, good post here Andrea.'
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Date: 3/24/2022 5:32:00 PM
More of a statement sad but true. we can't go back but must look for the next electronic changes that will take over.
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Date: 3/24/2022 5:21:00 PM
Excellent Lind30, Andrea. I agree with your poem, kids need to learn how to play outside and just have fun more.
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Date: 3/24/2022 2:45:00 PM
Wise words indeed Andrea, the kids need to get out and about as we did when we were growing up:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2022 2:31:00 PM
We must pray that sooner or later they will discover the greater riches of the ‘real’ world. Now in my day……..No! Stop me!
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Date: 3/24/2022 12:02:00 PM
i agree 100%, andrea! i think it's sad that kids don't have the freedom (or desire) to go outside and play in their neighborhoods...
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Date: 3/24/2022 11:49:00 AM
Commons sense should tell parents their children need to be outdoors for eyesight to develop normally, otherwise they are subject to a lifetime of myopia and other health problems. . . . .Enjoyed, Andrea! Aloha!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/24/2022 5:20:00 PM
thanks. And Not many parents with common sense these days.
Date: 3/24/2022 8:38:00 AM
Well said Andrea, kids today would rather hibernate in their rooms, they should be out getting fresh air and seeing real life. Tom
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