On Breakaway

Spear my heart with love
Let it beat; Let it clap
Open my eyes with the truth
Let it see; Let not be fooled

Glance at me once or twice
Behold and distinguish all spice
Perceive not the bad but nice
Quietly do becoming wise

Everyday there are changes
Find, explore all that enhances
Hurdle, succeed all ravages
Breakaway from all damages

by: olive_eloi
5:40pm
01/06/2014

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Lovely short piece Olive. Now where's that spear, James :)
Madappattu Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 5:06 AM
Nicely penned
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 3:49 PM
thanks.. :) God bless you. :)
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