On Blue Ocean

On Blue Ocean
Blue ocean rises and falls with cool serenity, creating crests of roving waves, seeking yellow, sun-bleached shores. Aah! Behold its engorged bosoms, heaving and trembling, passionately spurting out bubbly, champagne-like, sparkling spumes, that elatedly lick and tickle flashy red tails of flirtatious mermaids. On summer nights, inhale deeply its fresh salty scent, which clings to the air, like an old lover. Then savoring the sweet, rhythmic undulation of rippling, indigo ocean, I drowse in Poseidon’s arms and, drift off … on a dream.
01-06-2016 Contest: Anacreontic Verse 2 Sponsor: Edward Ebbs Placement: 3rd

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Date: 8/24/2017 8:34:00 PM
What would Aquaman and the Sub Mariner say about this Might be a little jealous . Hee, hee :) Imagination supreme my fellow poetess. I love it, very satisfying and descriptive. Great works James :D (if you don't know Aquaman is a DC comics character Sub Mariner is a Marvel comics character both of whom live in the sea and have their own kingdom) nerdy James..
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/27/2017 10:54:00 AM
Tehehehe - what a lovely compliment! I am very familiar with the characters referred to as I have been a fan for years! Thank you very much, James! Hope you have a great week ahead. Your friend, Pandita
Date: 2/1/2016 9:13:00 PM
A sensual and pretty write here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:48:00 AM
Hi Matthew, so glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita
Date: 1/28/2016 9:23:00 PM
PANDITA, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words, dear Linda! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Date: 1/20/2016 11:55:00 AM
really good.. congrats to you, pandita!..huggs
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:28:00 PM
Hi Nette, thank you very much for your visit and for leaving your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/20/2016 4:54:00 AM
How lovely Pandita .. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:28:00 PM
Hi Dr. Sharma, thank you very much for your visit and I am very happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/19/2016 9:20:00 PM
Pandita,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat...
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:32:00 PM
Hi Skat, I so very much appreciate your congratulations and kind support! Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 1/19/2016 5:28:00 PM
Very beautiful with lovely imagery congrats on your win Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:32:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much, my friend, for your lovely compliments! Wishing you a very happy day! Pandita
Date: 1/19/2016 10:59:00 AM
Very beautiful, Pandita! Great imagery wrapped in a romantic, sensual feel. #7 Congratulations on this merited win. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you dear Paul, for your kind words, high score, encouragement, and continued support for my work! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 1/18/2016 10:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win Pandita, thank you for entering :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/19/2016 8:16:00 AM
Hi Edward, I am so delighted and thank you very much for placing this piece on your winners' list! Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 1/9/2016 5:54:00 AM
I'm enjoying the smile on my face. That line about the mermaid is a gem. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/9/2016 5:13:00 PM
Hi Scott, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 1/7/2016 4:44:00 PM
i love this poem
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Date: 1/9/2016 5:09:00 PM
Hi LL, thank you very much for your visit and I am very happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/6/2016 8:08:00 PM
My dear Pandita, I really enjoyed reading your lovely work this evening! The imagery is incredible! Good luck in the contest and a 7! Well done, my dear! Kika
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Date: 1/6/2016 8:10:00 PM
Many thanks, dear Kika, for your kind generosity and continued support for my work! I really appreciate it! Best regards. Pandita
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