On Blue Ocean

On Blue Ocean
Blue ocean rises and falls with cool serenity, creating crests of roving waves, seeking yellow, sun-bleached shores. Aah! Behold its engorged bosoms, heaving and trembling, passionately spurting out bubbly, champagne-like, sparkling spumes, that elatedly lick and tickle flashy red tails of flirtatious mermaids. On summer nights, inhale deeply its fresh salty scent, which clings to the air, like an old lover. Then savoring the sweet, rhythmic undulation of rippling, indigo ocean, I drowse in Poseidon’s arms and, drift off … on a dream.
01-06-2016 Contest: Anacreontic Verse 2 Sponsor: Edward Ebbs Placement: 3rd
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Lee Sr. Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:34 PM
What would Aquaman and the Sub Mariner say about this Might be a little jealous . Hee, hee :) Imagination supreme my fellow poetess. I love it, very satisfying and descriptive. Great works James :D (if you don't know Aquaman is a DC comics character Sub Mariner is a Marvel comics character both of whom live in the sea and have their own kingdom) nerdy James..
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August 27, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Tehehehe - what a lovely compliment! I am very familiar with the characters referred to as I have been a fan for years! Thank you very much, James! Hope you have a great week ahead. Your friend, Pandita
Anish Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:13 PM
A sensual and pretty write here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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February 4, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Hi Matthew, so glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita
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January 28, 2016 at 9:23 PM
PANDITA, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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January 29, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words, dear Linda! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Onclaud Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:55 AM
really good.. congrats to you, pandita!..huggs
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January 20, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Hi Nette, thank you very much for your visit and for leaving your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:54 AM
How lovely Pandita .. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
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January 20, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Hi Dr. Sharma, thank you very much for your visit and I am very happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Pandita,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat...
Sietesantos Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Hi Skat, I so very much appreciate your congratulations and kind support! Warmest regards! Pandita
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Very beautiful with lovely imagery congrats on your win Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 20, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much, my friend, for your lovely compliments! Wishing you a very happy day! Pandita
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Very beautiful, Pandita! Great imagery wrapped in a romantic, sensual feel. #7 Congratulations on this merited win. ~ Warm regards // paul
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January 20, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Thank you dear Paul, for your kind words, high score, encouragement, and continued support for my work! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Ebbs Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Congrats on your win Pandita, thank you for entering :)
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January 19, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Hi Edward, I am so delighted and thank you very much for placing this piece on your winners' list! Have a great day! Pandita
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:54 AM
I'm enjoying the smile on my face. That line about the mermaid is a gem. Enjoyed the read.
Sietesantos Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Hi Scott, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:44 PM
i love this poem
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January 9, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Hi LL, thank you very much for your visit and I am very happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Ayala Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:08 PM
My dear Pandita, I really enjoyed reading your lovely work this evening! The imagery is incredible! Good luck in the contest and a 7! Well done, my dear! Kika
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January 6, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Many thanks, dear Kika, for your kind generosity and continued support for my work! I really appreciate it! Best regards. Pandita
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