On Bended Knee

I come to thee on bended knee

Praying my beloved thou wilt be

Entry for Kim Rodriques' "A Valentine Crystalline" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Smith Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:30 AM
Love it Bob...
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 2:24 PM
bob, from humor to romance, your range is wide; your artwords eloquent!... glad to see you on my page many thanks!...huggs
Proxenos Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 12:08 PM
I love these lines Robert, how could a woman refuse such a loving proposal! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Wanter Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Make a lacy cut-out card of your own, color it pink and red, and use this verse. Guaranteed she "will."
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 5:35 AM
- So tender and beautiful, Bob - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Lovely, Robert. Bravo.
Bauer Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 4:54 PM
perfect! so much said in just 2 lines, bob!
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 4:39 PM
aww how sweet Robert and we have chosen a similar theme for the contest too - great minds think alike:-) hugs Jan xx
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