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On Bended Knee

I come to thee on bended knee Praying my beloved thou wilt be Entry for Kim Rodriques' "A Valentine Crystalline" Contest

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Date: 2/7/2019 11:30:00 AM

Love it Bob...

Date: 2/5/2019 2:24:00 PM

bob, from humor to romance, your range is wide; your artwords eloquent!... glad to see you on my page many thanks!...huggs

Date: 2/5/2019 12:08:00 PM

I love these lines Robert, how could a woman refuse such a loving proposal! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Date: 2/5/2019 9:58:00 AM

Make a lacy cut-out card of your own, color it pink and red, and use this verse. Guaranteed she "will."

Date: 2/5/2019 5:35:00 AM

- So tender and beautiful, Bob - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 2/4/2019 10:35:00 PM

Lovely, Robert. Bravo.

Date: 2/4/2019 4:54:00 PM

perfect! so much said in just 2 lines, bob!

Date: 2/4/2019 4:39:00 PM

aww how sweet Robert and we have chosen a similar theme for the contest too - great minds think alike:-) hugs Jan xx